Here's my cover from Black Sabbath ,

Cool, one of my favourite Sabbath songs very good cover, mate. great job.

I like your tele as well

Hey mate! Nice cover indeed and I think you nailed it pretty nicely! Congratulations! What I would work a bit on, would be the bends such as the one at about 01:34 - it feels a little weak and it could be executed with more conviction. Otherwise, I think you stayed true to the spirit and if bleez, who's a diehard fan said it, we have to agree! Let's see what the other guys have to add!

Keep rocking!

Cosmin

Thank you guys ,
that's why I asked questions to you about bending Cosmin

Hi Renan! Great video! This song is fantastic, and your version is great! You really captured the feel of this amazing band that has influenced lots of rock and metal bands from everywhere.

Learning complete songs is an excellent training for many aspects of our music skills. You train your ear, your rhythm playing, your feeling, the different techniques involved and also, you can get composing and arranging concepts if you pay attention to them while you learn and practice the tune. So, my suggestion is to keep on playing this one every day, making it sound tighter and deeper while you continue working on new songs.

Keep on rocking!!

Hey mate, I am glad if I could help, so please keep asking them I would also recommend you to take a look over this lesson if you want to catch some nice bends and vibrated notes, for your drills:

https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/ls/John-Mayer-Style-Ballad/

The tone is pretty clean and it will force you to become more and more accurate

What say you?

This post has been edited by Cosmin Lupu: Jul 5 2014, 01:33 PM