well, well, well..... first of all Thanxs for share your song!
I like it very much! ... I felt it very familiar because i like that style a lot, it was remind me Metallica a lot!
my technical feedback:
I couldn't hear you always on pitch. I'm sure that's for the technique you are using. When you sing like James Hetfield, (like if you were angry), the sound of the voice is very cool. However it is more difficult to sing on pich when you are singing in that way, because you are not using the total capability of your vocal cords. You are forcing your cords, so you cannot control them like when you sing with your clean voice.
So my advice is to pay attention on that. The rest is perfect!
My congrats to you!!!!!
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