http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wdc0QHNWuQY
Your main problem is in the timing, try to tap your foot and follow the drums (0:18 is an example where things get faster than they should), just get into the groove.
Always be watching out for keeping in tune, too - your bends are sounding a lot better, and your vibrato is sounding great!
I remember you posted this a while ago, and I can tell it's MUCH better! you enter the phrase on time on the first 3-4 but then on 0:15 I think mis interpreted where the beat is. Make sure you listen to the original and be aware where every beat 1 is, and what note is being played on that beat,
Because all your notes are right, it's just displaced at the end!
And I think the backing track is in Gb, and you are playing in G, so you have to move everything down a fret. If I'm not mistaken
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