Another one, any constructive comments welcomed.....
I woke up this morning,
to an empty space where you once lay,
I didnt know where you were,
Or why you went away,
Was it something I did to hurt you,
Did I say something to make you cry,
I thought it was love that I saw,
When I looked into your eyes,
Chorus
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There's nothing I can do,
I don't know where you are,
I don't know how near or even how far.....Your Gone!
I wish you would come back and talk to me,
Tell me what it is that made you leave,
Your Gone, Your Gone!
What can I say to make you come back,
Is there anything I can do,
To get our love back on track,
I miss you, I do..
All I want is for you to be back,
where you belong
Just give me a chance to show you,
That my love for you is strong,
Without your love, I feel like I have died,
Won't you come back,
Take away the emptiness I feel inside,
Give me warmth & Love in the place I want to be,
Wrapped in your arms for all eternity.
Yet again, I like these. They have great structure, each line supports itself very well, and the flow is smooth, without any unneeded breaks or pauses.
It was nice Iian
Seems like its unfinished, would make a nice song though
nice lyrics mate
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