My First Real Full Song..., ...without vocals though |
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Feb 26 2015, 08:23 PM
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Hey guys,
I wanted to share this with you in a topic of its own. I came up with this the other night and finally recorded it today. It's still very rough and not very tight, but it's a start and it's my first real full song recorded. Let me know what you think! https://soundcloud.com/benjamin-storm-linnebjerg/unmixed-rough-and-untight-canto-i And most importantly: I also need someone to do vocals, so if anyone can do that, please don't be shy! 
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Feb 27 2015, 07:11 AM
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Very cool tune dude!!!! I like the composition and the riffs. Also the production value is quite good and the mix! What kind of vocals are you hearing?
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Feb 27 2015, 07:24 AM
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its really good, very cool groove to that indeed
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Feb 27 2015, 08:06 AM
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Sounds very cool, I really like it
Looking forward to hear the final result  |
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Feb 27 2015, 11:17 AM
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Congrats on completing your first song!
I think this song has a very cool, a bit sinister vibe to it and you have all the sections down. On a first listen I have reacted on a few details: - Leads (especially intro ones) don't sound as strong as rhythm guitars. I think the issue is with lots of long notes that are sustained but without any vibrato, bending or whammy bar vibrato. They just seem to hang until guitar naturally loses sustain. Maybe try spicing them up a bit, that would make a huge impact on the song as a whole. - Leads have repetitive phrasing when it comes to rhythm. This might have been intentional though and could work for this type of song. When I'm referring to "rhythm phrasing", I think about certain rhythm patterns (combination of different note values) being repeated throughout phrasing. Of course, for this style of music this could indeed work I guess. - Song is a bit flat sounding between its sections. Maybe try dynamically play some parts like chorus stronger and with more attitude, for example picking harder in the chorus so you get a bit more dense and/or loud rhythms. Also it is a good approach to record additional layers, rhythms, fills and maybe other instruments over sections you would like to "lift up". All in all - this is awesome and I'd love to hear some vocals over it Who is up for the challenge? -------------------- For GMC support please email support (at) guitarmasterclass.net
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Feb 27 2015, 11:41 PM
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QUOTE (Caelumamittendum @ Feb 26 2015, 07:23 PM)  Hey guys, I wanted to share this with you in a topic of its own. I came up with this the other night and finally recorded it today. It's still very rough and not very tight, but it's a start and it's my first real full song recorded. Let me know what you think! https://soundcloud.com/benjamin-storm-linnebjerg/unmixed-rough-and-untight-canto-i And most importantly: I also need someone to do vocals, so if anyone can do that, please don't be shy! Man that's very impressive!! It's hardly 'not tight' and rough, it sounds like a quality recording and song. I really like it. |
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Feb 28 2015, 02:12 AM
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I've just found this one at Gab's Army thread! I'm really proud of you mate! After months and months provided fantastic unfinished songs, riffs and progressions, you have a complete song ready for vocals! Lots of congrats!
I'm not ready for some Rusen Allen vocals so let's see who is in? 
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Feb 28 2015, 11:18 AM
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Sweet track man, looking forward to hearing more!
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Mar 9 2015, 06:14 PM
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Good Job Cael.
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