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Posted by: sentia Aug 1 2011, 07:52 PM

Hi, I just finished recording a new song. It's mostly vocal, so the guitar isn't as interesting other songs I've made, but there's a short solo and the sound quality is better. Tell me what you think...

Posted by: Daniel Realpe Aug 2 2011, 12:46 PM

nice tune! thanx for sharing! sounds inspired!

Posted by: sentia Aug 2 2011, 06:16 PM

thanks for the kind words!

Posted by: sentia Aug 5 2011, 11:36 PM

I changed the tone (made the guitar fuzzier), added a drum track, and tweaked a few things. Is this better or worse? http://soundcloud.com/sentientecho/air-fuzz

Posted by: thefireball Aug 6 2011, 12:27 AM

I personally like the first version better. The fuzz kind of clouds your nice voice. If you like the fuzz, perhaps lower the volume on everything so we can hear your voice - I'm talking about the second version. Great job!

Brandon

Posted by: sentia Aug 6 2011, 12:48 AM

Thanks for the feedback -- I guess I didn't pay much attention to the vocals when I was editing it! Here is an updated version, with softer fuzz and louder vocals (I didn't make the drums softer because it's already a little bit hard for me to hear them):

http://soundcloud.com/sentientecho/air-fuzz-1

Hopefully this is better...

Posted by: Adrian Figallo Aug 6 2011, 03:39 AM

i like this last versions, sounds a bit like pink floyd

Posted by: Todd Simpson Aug 6 2011, 03:45 AM

Well done Good writing and performance! Maybe boots the mid/treble on each track so as to make things a bit more distinct, or apply an EQ to the master bus, or your fav plugin for mastering, etc. Just to give some sparkle to the mix. But that's a fairly minor concern on the demo, the important thing is you wrote and performed a really cool track. Well done!

Todd

Posted by: sentia Aug 6 2011, 06:41 PM

Thanks a lot Todd and Adrian