Composition, Sweet Child o' Mine tribute song |
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Jun 7 2009, 09:34 PM
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Hey guys !
I'm learning Piotr Kaczor's "Guitar Loves Piano", and found a very nice lick which I have transposed to fit a backing I made exclusively for it ! When isolated, the lick sounds a lot like the intro of Sweet Child o' Mine, and you're probably gonna throw stones at your PC's screen, but then again, it's not something I call purely my own composition !  I hope you guys have Guitar Pro 5.0 ! This is just the intro, but I think the rest is going to sound a bit less like the Guns N' Roses song ! I called it "Summer", but it's just a name that jumped to my mind, as it has quite a happy tune. I believe the song is in A major, standard tuning (E) Hope you guys like the song, and please comment on possible improvements (the bass line is a bit experimental, so I'm expecting a lot of criticism on this one) ! I must insist on the last file being the most "recent" one !  Alexander  EDIT 1 (Summer (2) added). Slight change in the melody in the 8th bar ! EDIT 2 (Summer (3) added). Slight change in bass and added some 16 bars of clean backing guitar ! EDIT 3 (Summer (4) added). Slight change here and there. Added some more lead and such... This post has been edited by Alexiaden93: Jun 23 2009, 07:52 PM
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Summer.gp5 ( 6.16K )
Number of downloads: 214
Summer__2_.gp5 ( 6.16K )
Number of downloads: 196
Summer__3_.gp5 ( 8.34K )
Number of downloads: 188
Summer__4_.gp5 ( 8.73K )
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Jun 7 2009, 09:42 PM
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Well it does sound a lot like guns
But don't worry add some interesting vocals, and maybe change the progression a bit and it will be great!
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Jun 7 2009, 10:06 PM
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QUOTE (Ivan Milenkovic @ Jun 7 2009, 10:42 PM)  Well it does sound a lot like guns But don't worry add some interesting vocals, and maybe change the progression a bit and it will be great! Yeah I know... It's a tribute song though ! It's just the intro ^^ Thanks for the comment ! Please comment ! I'm going to bed !
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Jun 8 2009, 07:50 PM
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Nice progression and idea, mate!
I'm waiting for your "GlP" take!
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Jun 8 2009, 09:19 PM
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Thanks Piotr ! What does G|P mean though ?
 I feel so stupid right now !
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Jun 8 2009, 10:37 PM
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Sorry, mate - my fault. It means "Guitar loves piano".
btw: you should continue to work on "Summer" composition, I really like it. |
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Jun 9 2009, 10:05 PM
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QUOTE (Piotr Kaczor @ Jun 8 2009, 11:37 PM) Sorry, mate - my fault. It means "Guitar loves piano". btw: you should continue to work on "Summer" composition, I really like it. Thanks a lot Piotr ! I'm still working, and as you can see I try to post my new takes of it, and you can see my progress and comment on mistakes and such ! I don't have a webcam able to film me yet, for the GLP take !
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Jun 23 2009, 07:54 PM
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New draft uploaded ! Please check it out and tell me what you think !
Be gentle when judging me... My licks are rather desperate. I'm going to make some parts without modulations all the time, which will make the composition much easier ! This way I can stick to ONE key, and not three
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Jun 25 2009, 03:22 PM
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I'm not much of a Guns'n'roses fan, so I am not the best to judge. But keep it up! I'm looking forward to hearing the full result.
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Jun 26 2009, 04:45 AM
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QUOTE (Caelumamittendum @ Jun 25 2009, 04:22 PM) I'm not much of a Guns'n'roses fan, so I am not the best to judge. But keep it up! I'm looking forward to hearing the full result. I don't blame you for disliking my composition ! It's very mediocre, and I'm probably just going to give up, to make some time for other things, like actually playing the guitar ! Any critic is a good critic !
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