Lyrics/poetry, Feedback.
Jesse
Apr 24 2011, 02:01 PM
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Hey guys,
I've written some lyrics, just parts, when I get inspired, and this is just more of e poem, on which I would love some feedback.
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A bright darkness and a dim light,
realisation sets all unimportant things aside.
My heart bearing the weight of the night,
a fading light, almost out of sight.
Finding the remnants of your power and might,
the soul preparing for the final fight.
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Remember, I don't really think these things trough, or really think about how it should go, often, a line or 2 just pops into my head.

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This post has been edited by Jesse: Apr 24 2011, 02:02 PM


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- Jesse   Lyrics/poetry   Apr 24 2011, 02:01 PM
- - quadrium   I like it. Your ryhming is very strong. When i try...   Apr 24 2011, 02:16 PM
- - Jesse   Thank's:) Maybe we can share some lyrics some ...   Apr 24 2011, 02:19 PM
- - quadrium   QUOTE (Jesse @ Apr 24 2011, 01:19 PM) Tha...   Apr 24 2011, 02:27 PM
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