In the midst of a constant battle against my sheety computer, I've finally managed to somewhat complete a song.
The mix is far from perfect though, and I probably need to re-record some parts also. I'd really like to get some suggestions on how to improve it.

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7297363

This post has been edited by botoxfox: Feb 1 2009, 08:18 PM

I think the playing is good, but the mix seems way too high-endy.

I like the part at 1:2? where the keys came in. Nice break.

Cool song The playing is nice and tight.
I'm not a fan of the mix though, as mentioned above, the highs are way to high on the guitars. Especially the lead guitars. The rhythm tracks sound more balanced.

The rest of the instruments sounds normal though.

Hm, drums sound really weird, like it had some strange reverb of the small room.....
The song itself is really nice

I think what's mentioned above is true, the whole track is too high, the cymbals and the whole drums are like pitched very high. Also the lead guitars are like "thin".
Maybe you need some sample like the EZDrummer (if you're not using that one). If you are using it you could eq the mix to correct that high pitched sound. The same regarding the guitars.
The composition is cool, very major

Keem them comming mate!

Agree with everybody else on the mixing part butthe song itself is reall cool

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This post has been edited by botoxfox: Apr 23 2011, 01:18 PM