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Jan 18 2012, 02:20 PM
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Hi i do not know if this is the right forum or not but here is tune i wrote a little while back for my solo project soul release....this is called "blood in the moonlight....all feedback is welcome.......shred on.........Art Caveretta aka pikman
Blood_In_The_Moonlight.mp3 ( 7.96MB )
Number of downloads: 452This post has been edited by pikman: Jan 18 2012, 02:23 PM |
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Jan 18 2012, 02:54 PM
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Oh, this is very good man, sounds awesome, I like the intro a lot, and riffs and solo are very good!
 I think you need to work a bit more on the drums, possibly make them a bit more interesting with more fills or something, and the mix is getting muddy once the faster part starts. Other then that, I must say you composed this very good. Solo is really good, with some very good ideas!
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Jan 18 2012, 04:02 PM
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I like the way it starts, both guitars go really good together,
I love the clean tone, it's thick Nice intro riff! reminds of Megadeth a bit, but not really I like the way it develops, it makes sense to me, The harmonies are really well done, I like it ! you are really good! Pretty good job! thanks for sharing! -------------------- Visit my:
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Jan 19 2012, 12:21 AM
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wow ,great tune, it's rocking !
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Jan 19 2012, 12:45 PM
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Thank you for all the feed back,it is much appreciated......shred on
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Jan 19 2012, 02:54 PM
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Awesome song overall, although I must say I got really mad when I realised you ENDED the song right when it got to the melodic part, with suspended chords in the background... WHY ?! You could easily make a big melodic section then mirror the song structure to get an outro like the intro...
 Anyway, what you've already written is great, but would be a shame not to make something more out of it. 
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