First of all I want to thank everybody that replied to my prior posting about help with my singing voice. Your input helped me greatly, I went through several of Nemanya's lessons especially the ones on breathing and my voice has become a lot stronger. The chorus of the song was impossible for me last time, even though I know it's not perfect this time I was able to give it a go.
I posted another sound clip for some more input and see whether it is just me that thinks I'm improving lol. I used a backing track because I really wanted the focus to be my voice. Thank you all so much and I would greatly appreciate your input once again.