Original lesson: Jonathan's Melodic Soloing by Jonathan Burgos

Hi GMC! Long time no takes from me. It's time to come back :) Can't wait for your feedback. Cheers! Artyom.

Hello Artyom!

Long time no see indeed man! But as usual, your playing is excellent - the only things I noticed are a couple of spots (1:18 and 2:14) where your vibrato was a bit too rash. Otherwise, you have a very good control over articulation in general!

Good work!

Cosmin

I agree with Cosmin. Overall feeling is very nice - quite good pitch and playing precision. But as Cosmin said - those "nervous" vibratos add some distraction to this mood No all of them ofcourse because You also showed us some descent vibrato in here Probably the problem is with the....patience The moments when You have "nothing to do" and You feel like adding this speed rate to vibrato adds something to the song...but it isn't...it's opne of the issues with what sounds good and what we think sounds good while we play. Unfortunately sometimes we're no able to judge some phrasing concepts while we play...but we can hear and judge once we record and listen. Try to listen to Your take a few times more and I'm sure that from the listener position You'll easily find out what's wrong

Nice take mate. The most difficult thing of these type of lessons is to give them a cool feeling and I think that you did a good job. There is still room to improvement as the other guys said, and I can add that the last phrases (starting at 02:13) has some timing and pitch issues that should be fixed. Besides that it's a good take! Keep on rocking.

Pass: 8.7