Song 1 (heavy)
audiopaal
Sep 17 2009, 12:24 AM
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Hi guys.

I recorded an intro to my initial idea, and added drums and bass..

This is what I've got so far: Attached File  Song_1.mp3 ( 3.29MB ) Number of downloads: 525



Please tell me what you think about it so far, what you'd like to change etc..? smile.gif

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Jose Mena
Oct 6 2009, 07:31 PM
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Sounds like we have the song structure almost figured out, I want like one more section for a bridge where the song reaches a climax

Any ideas

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Oct 6 2009, 07:57 PM
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QUOTE (Jose Mena @ Oct 6 2009, 08:31 PM) *
Sounds like we have the song structure almost figured out, I want like one more section for a bridge where the song reaches a climax

Any ideas

That's what I'm working on smile.gif
But please, if anyone have any ideas on how it should be
(as my idea might not please everyone, who knows? smile.gif), spit it out biggrin.gif

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QUOTE (audiopaal @ Oct 6 2009, 07:57 PM) *
That's what I'm working on smile.gif
But please, if anyone have any ideas on how it should be
(as my idea might not please everyone, who knows? smile.gif), spit it out biggrin.gif


maybe after a chorus it could quieten down into a short drum/bass part maybe with some small guitar parts with lots of effects (delay/chorus, maybe a phaser? lol) and then a short stop for a beat or two, then into a powerfull booming breakdown tongue.gif followed by a chorus?

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- audiopaal   Song 1 (heavy)   Sep 17 2009, 12:24 AM
- - Rated Htr   Nice Intro Audio! Very melancolic entrance...A...   Sep 17 2009, 12:32 AM
|- - audiopaal   QUOTE (Rated Htr @ Sep 17 2009, 01:32 AM)...   Sep 17 2009, 06:26 AM
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- - Jose Mena   Awesome audiopaal great stuff, not much I could ad...   Sep 17 2009, 05:35 AM
- - MickeM   Again, great sound from the AMT   Sep 17 2009, 08:20 AM
|- - audiopaal   QUOTE (MickeM @ Sep 17 2009, 09:20 AM) Ag...   Sep 17 2009, 08:52 AM
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- - Iluha   bass sounds a bit off at the intro but easy to fix...   Sep 17 2009, 09:13 AM
|- - audiopaal   QUOTE (Iluha @ Sep 17 2009, 10:13 AM) bas...   Sep 17 2009, 09:25 AM
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- - muntahunta   wow, im liking this more and more just a questio...   Sep 17 2009, 03:06 PM
|- - audiopaal   QUOTE (muntahunta @ Sep 17 2009, 04:06 PM...   Sep 17 2009, 03:28 PM
|- - muntahunta   QUOTE (audiopaal @ Sep 17 2009, 03:28 PM)...   Sep 17 2009, 04:01 PM
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- - Iluha   It sounded more like a chorus than a verse.. and t...   Sep 17 2009, 07:19 PM
- - audiopaal   I liked that If it'll be verse or chorus we ...   Sep 17 2009, 09:06 PM
- - muntahunta   im happy with that.... anyone heard from colonel d...   Sep 17 2009, 11:49 PM
|- - audiopaal   QUOTE (muntahunta @ Sep 18 2009, 12:49 AM...   Sep 18 2009, 07:57 AM
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- - Jose Mena   QUOTE (Iluha @ Sep 17 2009, 02:19 PM) It ...   Sep 19 2009, 04:48 PM
- - Jose Mena   So this is my suggestion, I had to do some drums a...   Sep 19 2009, 07:51 PM
|- - Iluha   QUOTE (Jose Mena @ Sep 19 2009, 07:51 PM)...   Sep 19 2009, 09:24 PM
|- - audiopaal   QUOTE (Iluha @ Sep 19 2009, 10:24 PM) Tha...   Sep 19 2009, 10:20 PM
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- - muntahunta   jose, thats awesome   Sep 20 2009, 03:06 AM
- - Iluha   5 days with no progress? I think it's time to ...   Sep 25 2009, 10:22 AM
|- - audiopaal   QUOTE (Iluha @ Sep 25 2009, 11:22 AM) 5 d...   Sep 25 2009, 12:22 PM
|- - Iluha   QUOTE (audiopaal @ Sep 25 2009, 12:22 PM)...   Sep 25 2009, 01:49 PM
|- - audiopaal   QUOTE (Iluha @ Sep 25 2009, 02:49 PM) Gah...   Sep 25 2009, 02:38 PM
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- - muntahunta   yea, sorry guy's ive been very busy lately, ha...   Sep 26 2009, 07:25 PM
- - muntahunta   come on guy's we cant let this one fall throug...   Sep 30 2009, 12:13 AM
- - Iluha   Where's Jose?...   Sep 30 2009, 01:43 AM
- - audiopaal   As I said, I'm gonna record something this wee...   Sep 30 2009, 07:37 AM
|- - Iluha   QUOTE (audiopaal @ Sep 30 2009, 08:37 AM)...   Sep 30 2009, 02:00 PM
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- - Jose Mena   Hey Guys I am here I've looked at your posts,...   Oct 2 2009, 08:55 PM
|- - audiopaal   QUOTE (Jose Mena @ Oct 2 2009, 09:55 PM) ...   Oct 2 2009, 08:56 PM
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- - audiopaal   Well, here's an updated version as promised I...   Oct 4 2009, 08:03 PM
- - Jose Mena   Good Stuff Audiopaal, The structure of the song is...   Oct 4 2009, 08:38 PM
|- - audiopaal   QUOTE (Jose Mena @ Oct 4 2009, 09:38 PM) ...   Oct 4 2009, 08:41 PM
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- - Jose Mena   QUOTE (audiopaal @ Oct 4 2009, 03:41 PM) ...   Oct 4 2009, 08:54 PM
|- - audiopaal   QUOTE (Jose Mena @ Oct 4 2009, 09:54 PM) ...   Oct 4 2009, 09:02 PM
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- - muntahunta   im in love with this!!! haha I do nee...   Oct 5 2009, 01:50 PM
- - Iluha   I'll be honest, the sound of the recording isn...   Oct 5 2009, 05:13 PM
- - Jose Mena   QUOTE (audiopaal @ Oct 4 2009, 04:02 PM) ...   Oct 5 2009, 07:03 PM
- - audiopaal   Here's an "updated version" with a l...   Oct 5 2009, 08:54 PM
|- - muntahunta   QUOTE (audiopaal @ Oct 5 2009, 08:54 PM) ...   Oct 6 2009, 01:11 AM
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- - Iluha   Well my biggest problem is the bass sound, I can...   Oct 6 2009, 03:02 AM
|- - Jose Mena   Any updates guys?   Oct 13 2009, 02:52 PM
|- - audiopaal   QUOTE (Jose Mena @ Oct 13 2009, 03:52 PM)...   Oct 13 2009, 10:50 PM
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- - audiopaal   Meh, I'm kinda stuck atm.. I'll work some ...   Oct 18 2009, 03:57 PM
- - muntahunta   unfortunatly not my pod x3 just broke (well, the ...   Oct 18 2009, 06:19 PM
- - Iluha   Nothing here man sorry me and my family just move...   Oct 18 2009, 06:40 PM
- - Jose Mena   No prob, I've been busy lately as well, this w...   Oct 20 2009, 02:53 AM
|- - audiopaal   QUOTE (Jose Mena @ Oct 20 2009, 03:53 AM)...   Oct 20 2009, 08:26 AM
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- - muntahunta   okay, sorry for the delay guy's my pod now has...   Nov 3 2009, 09:44 PM
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