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Posted by: TylerT Mar 7 2012, 08:53 AM

Hey guys! Based on all the help I got while posting my last song in regards to song structure, I thought I'd do it again for this new tune im working on!

This one is a little heavier, and I'm also having some trouble finding a good way to end it off

Here's is the link!

http://soundcloud.com/tylerteeple/ggt-3

Thanks !

Posted by: Cosmin Lupu Mar 7 2012, 12:44 PM

Hey Tyler, great as always man! I would let it breathe though as in my opinion it is a bit too crowded overall, so maybe a halftime heavy groove would end it nicely - I would also suggest to implement a less developed version of this possible ending groove somewhere in the middle, so that it won't just appear out of nowhere at the end

cheers mate

Cosmin

Posted by: TylerT Mar 8 2012, 12:01 AM

Awesome dude!!! Thanks so much Cosmin (fellow metal head \m/), I have an old lick I made that might just fit perfectly in this sense!

Ill post a new version when its ready!

Posted by: Cosmin Lupu Mar 8 2012, 08:15 AM

I shall be looking forward to that, my many stringed friend