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Mar 21 2008, 02:43 AM |
Many thanks guys!!
I'll work more on this tune hopefully during weekend and record vocals next week. Thinking of adding few extra instruments(sounds into arrangement,nothing too attacking, just to give it more ambient and feel,will see. -------------------- Youtube
MySpace Website Album "Let It Out" on iTunes and CD Baby Check out my video lessons and instructor board! The Pianist tune is progress,check it out! "ok.. it is great.. :P have you myspace? Can i to personalize this for you guy?" |
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Mar 21 2008, 03:16 PM |
I missed this thread too! SRV those are some great lyrics!
Muris- you've made a fantastic tune out of this- i cant wait to see the lesson |
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Mar 22 2008, 02:15 PM |
Thanks guys!!
Now I'm more confused about the I added,sounds better with it,rhythmic wise, but some of you said it's not well correct,gramm wise. Dunno what to do. -------------------- Youtube
MySpace Website Album "Let It Out" on iTunes and CD Baby Check out my video lessons and instructor board! The Pianist tune is progress,check it out! "ok.. it is great.. :P have you myspace? Can i to personalize this for you guy?" |
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Mar 22 2008, 05:46 PM
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Well I don't think it sounds bad.. I kinda like it but its not grammatically correct.. But look at rappers.. they make tons of money off stuff that makes a lot less sense
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Mar 22 2008, 05:56 PM |
Well I don't think it sounds bad.. I kinda like it but its not grammatically correct.. But look at rappers.. they make tons of money off stuff that makes a lot less sense So you want me to rap here?? -------------------- Youtube
MySpace Website Album "Let It Out" on iTunes and CD Baby Check out my video lessons and instructor board! The Pianist tune is progress,check it out! "ok.. it is great.. :P have you myspace? Can i to personalize this for you guy?" |
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Mar 22 2008, 06:07 PM |
maybe:
.you are so strong ..you are real strong ...you're truly strong ....(I'm out ) i'm no lyricist so pardon me if that isn't the desired effect.. just suggestions ofcourse.. |
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Mar 22 2008, 06:09 PM
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Mar 23 2008, 01:43 AM |
I'm in pain here,THE fits perfect into metric and rhythmic phrase.
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MySpace Website Album "Let It Out" on iTunes and CD Baby Check out my video lessons and instructor board! The Pianist tune is progress,check it out! "ok.. it is great.. :P have you myspace? Can i to personalize this for you guy?" |
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Mar 23 2008, 01:46 AM
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I'm in pain here,THE fits perfect into metric and rhythmic phrase. Dude.. like a guitar tone.. when it sounds good don't do anything to it.. |
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