 No More Hope Left, -an original song- |
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 Jul 31 2012, 06:02 PM
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 Tone Seeker  Group: Members Posts: 991 Joined: 10-March 08 From: Finland Member No.: 4.519  |
Hi guys !
Let me present an another new song. It's supposed to be quite metal but...I got severe brain fart and did poppish middle part  It just came ?!?  Also this has Middle-East / Indian vibe. (At least I think it has...)Oh well I've uploaded 2 versions of this. (Without middle part) https://soundcloud.com/alfafirefox/no-more-hope-left https://soundcloud.com/alfafirefox/no-more-hope-left-middle Gears used Guitars/Bass Drop-D Guitar Rig 5 Toontrack Metal Machine Ezmix2 Comments, thoughts and etc. would be nice !  -Cheers- Ville -------------------- |
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Jul 31 2012, 09:05 PM
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 Learning Roadie Group: Members Posts: 4.066 Joined: 9-March 10 From: United States, Arkansas Member No.: 9.801 |
Very nice! I liked that second version very much. It's quite progressive and the middle part is awesome.
 I recognize the "biker in the desert" part. haha. I would suggest something going on in the right channel as well as the left. When something's only in the left channel for the lead, it feels weird in my ear. But maybe you have another vision. Great job!! Brandon --------------------  Facebook Band Page Official YouTube Channel My Three Year Guitar Evolution Subscribe to my other YouTube Sample my projects on SoundCloud Find exclusive material at my Blogspot My success is all because of God. |
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Aug 1 2012, 12:37 AM
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 GMC:er  Group: GMC Instructor Posts: 6.289 Joined: 23-December 09 From: Atlanta, Georgia, USA Member No.: 8.794 |
Well spiff! Dude, let's write a tune together!
QUOTE (WeePee @ Jul 31 2012, 01:02 PM)  Hi guys ! Let me present an another new song. It's supposed to be quite metal but...I got severe brain fart and did poppish middle part It just came ?!? Also this has Middle-East / Indian vibe. (At least I think it has...)Oh well I've uploaded 2 versions of this. (Without middle part) https://soundcloud.com/alfafirefox/no-more-hope-left https://soundcloud.com/alfafirefox/no-more-hope-left-middle Gears used Guitars/Bass Drop-D Guitar Rig 5 Toontrack Metal Machine Ezmix2 Comments, thoughts and etc. would be nice ! -Cheers- Ville -------------------- VIDEO CHAT LESSON SATURDAY & SUNDAY!
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Aug 1 2012, 08:40 AM
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 Instructor Group: GMC Instructor Posts: 10.925 Joined: 11-March 10 From: England Member No.: 9.820 |
I love it, those Eastern melodies work brilliantly over the staccato riffs !
 I would leave the pop middle section out personally.. it sounds good on its own but maybe work it into another song ? -------------------- |
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Aug 1 2012, 09:17 AM
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Tone Seeker Group: Members Posts: 991 Joined: 10-March 08 From: Finland Member No.: 4.519 |
QUOTE (thefireball @ Jul 31 2012, 11:05 PM) I would suggest something going on in the right channel as well as the left. When something's only in the left channel for the lead, it feels weird in my ear. But maybe you have another vision. Great job!! Brandon Thanks for pointing that out. It's now fixed. I had so many track here and there so no wonder this kind things happen. QUOTE (Todd Simpson @ Aug 1 2012, 02:37 AM) Well spiff! Dude, let's write a tune together! Sure I'll PM you QUOTE (Ben Higgins @ Aug 1 2012, 10:40 AM) I love it, those Eastern melodies work brilliantly over the staccato riffs ! I would leave the pop middle section out personally.. it sounds good on its own but maybe work it into another song ? Yeah that's why I ended up doing 2 versions. Somebody has injected Coldplay stuff in me -------------------- |
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Aug 1 2012, 11:50 AM
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 Instructor Group: GMC Instructor Posts: 13.675 Joined: 14-June 10 From: Bucharest Member No.: 10.636 |
Hey man! Nice work!
I agree on the fact that combining the two is not necessarily the best idea, but that middle part can become another song on its own. And don't worry about the pop flavor - it's great! Music is honest as long as you allow it to be Don't hinder your feelings just because you think people will make fun of music for being pop/ whatever!Anything you would like me to assist you with? I would be glad to participate on your recordings  Cosmin -------------------- My music:
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Aug 1 2012, 01:03 PM
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Tone Seeker Group: Members Posts: 991 Joined: 10-March 08 From: Finland Member No.: 4.519 |
QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Aug 1 2012, 01:50 PM) Hey man! Nice work! I agree on the fact that combining the two is not necessarily the best idea, but that middle part can become another song on its own. And don't worry about the pop flavor - it's great! Music is honest as long as you allow it to be Don't hinder your feelings just because you think people will make fun of music for being pop/ whatever!Anything you would like me to assist you with? I would be glad to participate on your recordings Cosmin Hey thanks ! Yep it's really different. First I tried to create s middle part in Killswitch Engage style (like your lesson) but It came out really differently. But it's okay I kinda like it there and it's fun to notice that I can create something in pop style too Hey when I'm writing new stuff I'll notify you. Deal ? -------------------- |
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Aug 2 2012, 02:41 PM
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Instructor Group: GMC Instructor Posts: 13.675 Joined: 14-June 10 From: Bucharest Member No.: 10.636 |
QUOTE (WeePee @ Aug 1 2012, 12:03 PM) Hey thanks ! Yep it's really different. First I tried to create s middle part in Killswitch Engage style (like your lesson) but It came out really differently. But it's okay I kinda like it there and it's fun to notice that I can create something in pop style too Hey when I'm writing new stuff I'll notify you. Deal ? Hehe! Deal mate! I love melodic counterparts in aggressive songs
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Aug 2 2012, 03:58 PM
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Tone Seeker Group: Members Posts: 991 Joined: 10-March 08 From: Finland Member No.: 4.519 |
More comments guys ??
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Aug 2 2012, 11:00 PM
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Learning Roadie Group: Members Posts: 4.066 Joined: 9-March 10 From: United States, Arkansas Member No.: 9.801 |
QUOTE (WeePee @ Aug 2 2012, 09:58 AM) More comments guys ?? Don't worry, man. I'm sure people will comment on your thread again. After all, this community is awesome and gives great feedback. -Brandon -------------------- Facebook Band Page Official YouTube Channel My Three Year Guitar Evolution Subscribe to my other YouTube Sample my projects on SoundCloud Find exclusive material at my Blogspot My success is all because of God. |
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Aug 4 2012, 08:46 AM
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 Learning Tone Master Group: Members Posts: 655 Joined: 31-December 10 From: Sweden Member No.: 11.929 |
Very cool sound. I really like those quick little slides into the notes in the "Eastern sounding lead melody".
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