Original lesson: Whammy Bar Phrasing by Piotr Kaczor

I'd like to get some feedback at this point so here it goes. Thank you GMC!!

Hey mate, I would like to ask you to set this video on public or unlisted, so that we may see it and comment/ grade

Thank you

Cosmin

Hello Really cool take, nice tone and general impression, but...you have to work on intonation - some bends are out of tune slightly. You should also work on timing, especially when you hit your tremolo with your right hand (flutter effect). However I really like your playing and phrasing
Cheers,

Piotr

Hello there mate! Piotr's lesson is amazing and even though it might not seem as being that difficult, it's more difficult than many lessons based on other techniques, because intonation and expression are not something which can be learned by mechanical exercises. You must adjust your ear and hand on some very delicate and fine details. I suggest you should try and record your take alongside the original recording and see the differences once you are done - it's the easiest way to spot the places in which you are a little out of pitch. Keep up the good work!

Cosmin

Hi mate! I have nothing to add to what Cosmin and Piotr said about this lesson. Work on those things and you will get a 10 soon!
Keep on the good job!

Pass: 8