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Sep 9 2009, 02:00 PM
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heyhey, another song by me... im just after comments about the structure of the song/lyrics/etc, i know the recording isnt perfect (timing issues, bas mix, vocals very... ug, etc) but I thought you guys could give me some insight as to wether I should keep persuing this song. im not sure if I like it 100% yet, maybe some outside comments could sway me either way?
cheers Chris http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8075598 you know the people that play this game you know the people that drive you insane cant walk cant talk or die today sit there, wont you hear what i have to say and you might crumble and just cant take no more and you might tumble ill watch you hit the floor yea, gonna hunt you down gonna watch you drown lead you astray your so far away your so far away running through that mind could you be so blind leave it for today your so far away your so far away you know the way you can share this blame you know the way itll never be the same cant hide i tried to lie today follow me, today were gonna do it my way dont know all the things that you became dont know what to say when you call your name cant chase, this place i try today just deny, keep going cause im here to stay and you might crumble and just cant take no more and you might tumble ill watch you hit the floor yea, gonna hunt you down gonna watch you drown lead you astray your so far away your so far away running through that mind could you be so blind leave it for today your so far away your so far away SOLO yea, gonna hunt you down gonna watch you drown lead you astray your so far away your so far away running through that mind could you be so blind leave it for today your so far away your so far away This post has been edited by muntahunta: Sep 9 2009, 02:22 PM -------------------- Guitars: Epiphone Les Paul Standard w/ Dual EMG 81 Pickups. Size 11 Strings. Ibanez GRG170DX w/ Scallopd frets 17-24 - w/ Dimebucker and APH-1. Tanglewood TW28 STR DLX CE INDIANA Acoustic Guitar NEW: Dean Deceiver w/ EMG 81/EMG 85 Pickups Effects: Pod XT Live AND Pod X3 Live Recording: Cubase SX3 My Bands Myspace Act Of Silence Songs: Fly From The Inside (Cover) So Far Away Down Break The Cycle Never Again (Cover) Crash Wake Me More Acoustic Songs: Chris Kerswell Soundclick Page Check out Munta's Step By Step Songwriting Lesson |
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muntahunta So Far Away - Me Sep 9 2009, 02:00 PM
Rated Htr Have to admit, that at first I thought that it wou... Sep 9 2009, 02:11 PM muntahunta done, thanks for the comments man
yea, i need a ... Sep 9 2009, 02:23 PM Rated Htr yes it does, you just gotta know how to do it, not... Sep 9 2009, 02:31 PM
muntahunta QUOTE (Rated Htr @ Sep 9 2009, 02:31 PM) ... Sep 9 2009, 02:32 PM
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Ivan Milenkovic Great song man, I like it a lot!
The first g... Sep 9 2009, 11:55 PM audiopaal Good recording and great song!
The drums and ... Sep 10 2009, 07:17 AM Jesse That is some kick ass singing!!!!... Sep 10 2009, 08:25 AM Laszlo Boross I really enjoyed this song. Maybe the solo part ca... Sep 10 2009, 09:13 PM dark_dude Vocals remind me of Skid Row. Nice. Sep 11 2009, 04:35 PM muntahunta wow, skid row!!! thats a new one
Ive... Sep 13 2009, 01:36 PM Emir Hot Great voice man, reminds me of some 80's metal... Sep 13 2009, 02:07 PM
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