Posted by: steve25 May 16 2008, 10:22 PM
Hi guys, here is my second entry for the Wikiwriters competition here on GMC. This time the topic is PRS guitars and personally i prefer this article to my first one so hopefully Andrew ill agree as well .
http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/wiki/index.php/PRS_Guitars
Posted by: JVM May 16 2008, 10:34 PM
Very nice! The only thing I could say would be maybe instead of saying "paul reed smith" every instance of his name, you could just say Smith, but thats very minor.
Posted by: steve25 May 16 2008, 10:39 PM
QUOTE (JVM @ May 16 2008, 10:34 PM)
Very nice! The only thing I could say would be maybe instead of saying "paul reed smith" every instance of his name, you could just say Smith, but thats very minor.
Thanks JVM. You're right about the smith thing, that's 10 second job to change but i'm not sure if i'm allowed after i've posted it before Andrew has seen it so i better leave it for now
Posted by: Kristofer Dahl May 16 2008, 10:41 PM
QUOTE (steve25 @ May 16 2008, 09:39 PM)
Thanks JVM. You're right about the smith thing, that's 10 second job to change but i'm not sure if i'm allowed after i've posted it before Andrew has seen it so i better leave it for now
You may! The more changes you make before he grades it - the better!
Posted by: Andrew Cockburn May 17 2008, 01:23 PM
QUOTE (Kristofer Dahl @ May 16 2008, 05:41 PM)
You may! The more changes you make before he grades it - the better!
Agreed! It may take me a few hours to get to your articles, so if you have feedback and can make inmprovements in that time that's fine!
This gets a 5!
Posted by: steve25 May 18 2008, 01:35 PM
Thanks Andrew, i'm glad both of my entries so far have received 5s, my next one will be very much GMC related