New Song- Darkness In My Mind |
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Jun 20 2012, 10:35 AM
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This is a new song i am working on for my band that is going to be titled Darkness in my mind.
The vocals are recorded with webcam mic so dont excpect anything good there http://soundcloud.com/isac-lundqvist/darkness-in-my-mind-1 -------------------- My Gear
Ibanez RG Jackson js30 warrior jackson rr24 Line 6 Spider III amp Line 6 pod xt live Washburn acoustic Youtube Account My bands Myspace  |
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Jun 20 2012, 04:11 PM
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Wou mate! I'm impressed of your constant hard work! It's great that you decided to start adding your voice to give the overall shape to the track. The idea is very fresh and the melodies I like the melodies that you created. During the second verse I would add some melodic variations and maybe some rhythm variations or arrangements to make it even cooler. Well done mate!
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Jun 20 2012, 04:25 PM
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QUOTE (Gabriel Leopardi @ Jun 20 2012, 05:11 PM)  Wou mate! I'm impressed of your constant hard work! It's great that you decided to start adding your voice to give the overall shape to the track. The idea is very fresh and the melodies I like the melodies that you created. During the second verse I would add some melodic variations and maybe some rhythm variations or arrangements to make it even cooler. Well done mate! Thanks for you inputs Gabe -------------------- My Gear
Ibanez RG Jackson js30 warrior jackson rr24 Line 6 Spider III amp Line 6 pod xt live Washburn acoustic Youtube Account My bands Myspace |
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Jun 20 2012, 04:33 PM
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QUOTE (superize @ Jun 20 2012, 12:25 PM) Thanks for you inputs Gabe no problem mate! keep on the great job!
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Jun 20 2012, 05:31 PM
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I like the synth intro. You should put more tempo in the drums in chorus part.
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Jun 20 2012, 06:36 PM
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Well done on adding vocals at all to anything as it's something that is honestly hard and the last thing many guitar focused folks think of or attempt. I'm guilty of that myself. As guitar players it's easy to forget that many listeners can't really get in to a song until somebody is singing.
QUOTE (superize @ Jun 20 2012, 05:35 AM) This is a new song i am working on for my band that is going to be titled Darkness in my mind. The vocals are recorded with webcam mic so dont excpect anything good there http://soundcloud.com/isac-lundqvist/darkness-in-my-mind-1 |
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