 Starting This Song So Far - Lifted By Thoughts |
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 Sep 5 2009, 02:45 PM
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 GMC:er  Group: Members Posts: 188 Joined: 27-December 07 From: Krommenie, Netherlands Member No.: 3.625  |
Well... finally there's some sign of life from up here!!
 And I'm building a song a the moment... I'm not stuck yet, but like to get some comment from you guys on this song so far! The lyrics so far are: Lifted by thoughts (Spoken) Sitting near this old dreaming man, wondering what he's dreaming of. suddenly he's taking my hand In a squall, I'm looking through his eyes! He is showing me the best he could give... The love, the pain and sorrow he has missed His youth had given him nothing then pain But he has done his best to hold and maintain Could this man take care of his son? He's suffering, he has failed on this one... He is showing me ... he like to give more of his love, but he's old and won't hold it no more This post has been edited by skipdaflip: Sep 8 2009, 09:56 PM
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Sep 5 2009, 06:17 PM
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 Competitions Coordinator - Up the Irons  Group: GMC Senior Posts: 5.289 Joined: 17-February 08 From: Stavanger, Norway Member No.: 4.276 |
Great song so far mate
 You've come a long way!
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Sep 5 2009, 08:21 PM
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 Jazz Instructor  Group: GMC Instructor Posts: 2.691 Joined: 1-October 08 From: Belgrade Member No.: 6.012 |
lyrics are awesome!
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Sep 5 2009, 08:31 PM
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 Instructor Group: GMC Instructor Posts: 25.396 Joined: 20-November 07 From: Belgrade, Serbia Member No.: 3.341 |
This is great man, sounds really cool, and the lyrics are great as well!
About the mixing: - FX for vocals is a bit edgy - Drums are barely audible in mix - Cymbals are too strong -------------------- - Ivan's Video Chat Lesson Notes HERE
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Sep 5 2009, 09:03 PM
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GMC:er Group: Members Posts: 188 Joined: 27-December 07 From: Krommenie, Netherlands Member No.: 3.625 |
Thanks for all the replies!! I'll take your mixing advice and edit this while creating the rest of the song...
Mixing the song the right way stays hard!! I've got an Idea about the rest of the lyric... but will post the rest later! -------------------- Can anyone rate me?
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Sep 6 2009, 07:35 PM
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 Experienced Tone Seeker Group: Passive Posts: 4.809 Joined: 8-December 07 From: Hedel, Netherlands Member No.: 3.471 |
Where he's thinking of should be What he's thinking of
 
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