QUOTE (Rated Htr @ Feb 24 2009, 01:52 PM)
I am a worthless being
A man that should have never been born
Predictive, Future sense
Already powerless, I will fall tonight
It's all the same, people changing that's a lie
Clearly the problem here is me
After reading the whole thing, this part becomes confusing. You make the enemy seem like your friends and maybe someone that you loved that didnt love you back , yet you think the problem here is you.
I still like it alot. It strikes a chord in me.
I once believed in dreams, enchanted by fairy dust wings
My feelings put aside, taken by a hatred tide
I wished for happiness for all and for me
I spent years learning that It's only a dream
That was a really good verse.
Come on my friends, tell me I'm good once again
While I see evil being chosen over me
Your hipocrisy must never have an end
Maybe the fault is yours to bear
I guess this explains things more. At first you thought you were the problem, come to find out its the people who are around you and what there doing.
I'm not afraid to die, I know who I am
I'm a better person than what you deserve
Now it's time, to suffer again
The choice is not mine,you'll never understand
If you don't love me like I love you
Turn me to stone or kill the man (in me)
The time is running out, awaken the heartless begins
Vegeance wishes bring their death
For all their acts, they will regret
I never wanted to see them suffer like I do everyday
I just wanted love, they told me they wanted too
Come on my friends, tell me I'm good once again
While I see evil being chosen over me
You speak alot but I only see scars in your minds
Actions are none compared to mine
I like the Scars in your minds line. Very nice.
I'm not afraid to die, I know who I am
I'm a better person than what you deserve
Now it's time, to suffer again
The choice is not mine,you'll never understand
If you don't love me like I love you
Turn me to stone or kill the man (in me)
Imagine how I'll die today
While I show my heart slayed
This being you see before your eyes
It's the beast your acts made
Even though I call you friends
I promiss you, you all will meet him
And I say farewell, leaving only the quote
in articulo mortis
I dont know what articulo mortis is. This seems like your making a reference to all of you friends meeting the devil. Regardless of what it means. I loved it.
[SOLO]
Come on my friends,stop lying
your faces you must show
I know you all, you lie too much
You are nothing, you'd be better off dead
You're just to many for me to take down...
...Atleast today...
I'm not afraid to die, I know who I am
I'm a better person than what you deserve
Now it's time, to suffer again
The choice is not mine,you'll never understand
If you don't love me like I love you
Turn me to stone or kill the man (in me)
COPYRIGHTS
FILIPE ROCHA @2009
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Haven't written nothing in a very long time, not inspired and can't concentrate enough to write anything beautiful, or atleast decent, so this was written as a message, just as it is...
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I liked this. And I havnt been able to write lately either so dont feel to bad about that.
Some of the best lyrics, are ones that werent written by force, but because they had to be written
good luck with everything Rated-
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