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Posted by: Eat-Sleep-andJam Apr 29 2008, 01:30 AM

Find Me

I sit on the shore.
Glare at the sea.
Is there anyone out there waiting for me ?

From the East Coast to the Balkan Sea,
Im almost certain that someones waiting for me.
So I write this letter, with whats left in this pen.
Hopefully for someone to find it again.

If you dont know what I look like
Then youve seen all the wrong faces.
For I'm in the tiniest cracks, in the most obscure places.

I drank whats left of this beer meerly to free up this bottle.
After all this letter needs a place where it can woddle.
With no worries in me, I sent that bottle out to sea.
Hopefully, someone, will find me.
__________________________________________© John Minoia 2008

I was thinking of "Cast Away" the film starring Tom Hanks where hes cast out to sea, noone around. I pictured him sending a bottle out to sea and Ta-Da -Feedback is welcome

Posted by: The Uncreator Apr 29 2008, 02:18 AM

These are very cool, seem incomplete though, But i think you have got more in you for this story, For sure

PS
Extremely happy to see you add to lyrics section

Posted by: Eat-Sleep-andJam Apr 29 2008, 02:23 AM

Thanks Ill be adding lots more, I have a new hobby. This one is meant to be short, almost poem like. Leftovers, is the only one that is actually kind of complete, and maybe The OtherSide of Me aswell.

Posted by: The Uncreator Apr 29 2008, 02:29 AM

Excellent, add as much as you can !