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Feb 10 2012, 09:39 PM
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I have been spending the night working on some lyrics for a song for my band.
I just want some feedback on the writing if you guys think that these lyrics can work in a song Verse Now is the time to wake up and see that the world is not what it used to be we got fight to make things right to make a stand and defend our land now grab you axe and turn your volume to max and you play until your fingers bleed rock is the music that will make us smile now let us party till the end of time. Refrain Raise your fist in the air we will be rock all night and day X2 -------------------- My Gear
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Feb 11 2012, 02:26 AM
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in what kind of music will you apply it? it sounds to me like hair or power metal lyric
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superize Lyric Feedback Feb 10 2012, 09:39 PM
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Now is the time to wake up and see
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