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 Sep 4 2008, 09:14 PM
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 Learning Rock Star  Group: Members Posts: 1.982 Joined: 15-October 07 From: Leiria, Portugal Member No.: 3.056  |
First Recording, my views:
I think I missed two notes, but no bigger problems My muting on the pull off section seems a bit bad but I would like to hear your opinion The octave in the end wasn't muted after the string hit Here it goes  Should I correct anything before going up the tempo? 
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Sep 4 2008, 09:45 PM
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Nice take Filipe!
 Your playing sounds very nice and clean. Also, both the vibrato and the trills are great! I think the biggest problem here is the timing. It seems you're a bit out of sync. I suggest you play at this speed some more before you speed it up, but try to stomp your foot on every beat from now on. So that you physically feel every beat, and not just hearing it in your head. Also, try to accent the notes that comes on the beat. That will help a bit! I'm not sure what happened in the first lick, but there should be a 16th note pause before you start playing (take a look at the GuitarPro file and you'll see what I mean). If you miss that pause the whole intro lick will be ruined. I still think it was a good take though, and I'm really looking forward to hear you play this again when you've practiced it some more! //Marcus -------------------- |
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Sep 4 2008, 09:49 PM
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Learning Rock Star Group: Members Posts: 1.982 Joined: 15-October 07 From: Leiria, Portugal Member No.: 3.056 |
Ok, will do, I'll upload a new one after I trieds and feel I have something to show, thank you for the kind words
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Sep 4 2008, 09:51 PM
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Instructor Group: GMC Instructor Posts: 2.537 Joined: 27-May 07 From: Gothenburg, Sweden Member No.: 1.927 |
Great!
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Sep 6 2008, 10:39 PM
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Learning Rock Star Group: Members Posts: 1.982 Joined: 15-October 07 From: Leiria, Portugal Member No.: 3.056 |
Better?
If not, can you tell me exactly the places where I'm missing?
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Sep 6 2008, 10:42 PM
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 Ultimate Tone Guru  Group: Student Instructor Posts: 4.299 Joined: 26-July 07 From: Glommersträsk. Sweden Member No.: 2.410 |
Sounds good to me.... Keep paractising and you will play it even better
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Sep 6 2008, 10:45 PM
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Learning Rock Star Group: Members Posts: 1.982 Joined: 15-October 07 From: Leiria, Portugal Member No.: 3.056 |
I wanted to start slow so Marcus could tell me what was wrong from the beginning, so I could correct it and than move on to faster tempos
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Sep 7 2008, 08:10 AM
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Instructor Group: GMC Instructor Posts: 2.537 Joined: 27-May 07 From: Gothenburg, Sweden Member No.: 1.927 |
QUOTE (Rated Htr @ Sep 6 2008, 11:39 PM)  Better? If not, can you tell me exactly the places where I'm missing?
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