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 Dec 28 2008, 04:50 AM
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 Learning Rock Star  Group: Members Posts: 1.688 Joined: 15-October 07 From: Kilburn, London Member No.: 3.056  |
I've been practising some viking style metal, and decided to do a different type of lyrics I don't usually do, telling more of a story...
 Storm of the Night In a little tabern of the howling night Where man and shadows are born They feast, they talk, they cheer and growl And drink like there was no sorrow In service of war they fight to death Receiving all glory and gold Except for one fellow, his stories unkown And all he has is his dreams To find a land, after spilling blood Conquering his deepest desires The dames enchanted, The pleasure taken And a statue in his great honour Chorus The travellers found the biggest advice Never fight the cold and the rain Sometimes the eyes only see the sights And the storm is the greatest of pain Ending the travel of life We seek distant magic places To claim their ways as our own But the worst of all is to wake from the dark And find you're still in dry land You get the mightest crew you find Leading them all to heaven You're cursed to drown Your hope will be lost while your boat fades in the waves Chorus Solo Chorus COPYRIGHTS: Filipe Rocha 2008 This post has been edited by Rated Htr: Dec 28 2008, 04:51 AM -------------------- Thy wish for our happiness while thy take it away... QUOTE (Ivan Milenkovic @ Oct 13 2009, 11:04 PM)  There will always be people who are not informed or not understand music well, but it's about an attitude here. This was probably some immature person, so it may be wise not to pay attention to youths when they talk like that. They usually don't have the complete picture in their mind about life, let alone music. |
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Dec 28 2008, 02:18 PM
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 Fire Up The Blades, Moderator  Group: GMC Senior Posts: 7.004 Joined: 6-March 07 From: St. Petersburg, Florida Member No.: 1.304 |
You hit the viking metal imagery right on the head with a bloody axe, Reminds a lot of the band Stormwarrior. Maybe at the end where you have "chorus, solo, chorus", Switch the lyrics up a bit on the last chorus maybe to keep it interesting.
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Jan 7 2009, 03:49 PM
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 GMC:er Group: Members Posts: 2.344 Joined: 23-February 07 From: New york Member No.: 1.243 |
QUOTE (Rated Htr @ Dec 27 2008, 07:50 PM) I've been practising some viking style metal, and decided to do a different type of lyrics I don't usually do, telling more of a story... Storm of the Night In a little tabern of the howling night Where man and shadows are born They feast, they talk, they cheer and growl And drink like there was no sorrow I like the 2nd line here. It made me think how everytime a person is born, a shadow is aswell. Very cool. In service of war they fight to death Receiving all glory and gold Except for one fellow, his stories unkown And all he has is his dreams I dont really like the word fellow here. Thats just me though. I might have been boring and just said "man', but you were being creative and it fits well with the style. To find a land, after spilling blood Conquering his deepest desires The dames enchanted, The pleasure taken And a statue in his great honour I liked this verse, but it seemed rush. Like we wen from point A to B to C a little to quickly. I think it might have enhanced the piece if you took the idea from this verse, and made like another one out of it aswell. Thats just me being picky though. Chorus The travellers found the biggest advice Never fight the cold and the rain Sometimes the eyes only see the sights And the storm is the greatest of pain Ending the travel of life I like ! ^  We seek distant magic places To claim their ways as our own But the worst of all is to wake from the dark And find you're still in dry land Distant Magic Places feels very dragged out. I might have said something like "We seek distant places, Full of magic and...." You get the idea. You get the mightest crew you find Leading them all to heaven You're cursed to drown Your hope will be lost while your boat fades in the waves Ah I like the ending! Chorus Solo Chorus COPYRIGHTS: Filipe Rocha 2008 This wasnt bad at all. A couple tiny things I was picky on, and I noted them above. I dont really like Viking Metal but you did venture into the style perfectly. Keep Writing~ /John This post has been edited by Eat-Sleep-andJam: Jan 7 2009, 03:51 PM -------------------- Join Me On the Lyrics Board !
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