 Vasilije Vukmirovic Jazz Fusion Part 2 My Take, Your advice/feedbakc on my take pls!! |
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 Jan 24 2009, 03:58 PM
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 Learning Rock Star  Group: Members Posts: 778 Joined: 16-October 08 From: Breda , The Netherlands Member No.: 6.091  |
Hi GMC
Because experience is the best practice i had give it a go at a new lesson by Vasilije Vukmirovic. Here is my take: 
Fusion_Jazz_Part_2_Vasilije_Vukmirovic.MP3 ( 3.36MB )
Number of downloads: 78I liked the backing so i tried to jam along with this one. Point is i never find myself good enough. Sometimes you need the feedback and advice of other guitar players. That why i posted this take just to improve yourself. I am not good in scales so that what i have got to work on sometimes you can hear that.  Cheers -------------------- Gear: PaulReedSmith Santana 3
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Jan 24 2009, 04:15 PM
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 Instructor  Group: GMC Instructor Posts: 6.526 Joined: 13-September 08 From: Nis, Serbia Member No.: 5.892 |
I think since this is improvised a lot of things have to be taken in consideration when evaluating your playing and progress.
What comes to my mind is your phrasing (rhythmic placement) in the first part of solo is weak. As you got more into improvising it became more obvious where down and up beats were and melodies started to have structure to them more and more. My opinion - you should work on making that stronger , even if its improvising try to think of question and answer both in terms of melody and rhythm. Regarding melodic devices or scale you used... It sound like you went with D minor pentatonic trough most of it. How about trying some modal soloing , arpeggios ? That would definitely help in more ways then one as you would start to see your guitar neck differently  Overall since its improvised I have to say it is good work but I am sure you can do even better - thats why I mentioned those advices above. Thanks 
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Jan 24 2009, 04:26 PM
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Learning Rock Star Group: Members Posts: 778 Joined: 16-October 08 From: Breda , The Netherlands Member No.: 6.091 |
Hello Pedja,
Thx for taking the time to listen an analyse. That is all i needs to be a better player. Yes i improvised all. You r right about that and also about the Dm pentatonic. I am not familiar with other scales (yet ) so that is what i need to work on.Any recommendation to a lesson on scales an arpeggio's? Yes your question and answer is also a part i have to work on. Now i just play on and play to something that come up in my mind, there no real red line in way i am playing. Any lessons in particular that are handling that subject? Thanks for your feedback i appreciated it very much -------------------- Gear: PaulReedSmith Santana 3
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Jan 24 2009, 06:08 PM
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 Accomplished Tone Master  Group: GMC Wiki:er Posts: 1.745 Joined: 17-January 08 From: Scotland Member No.: 3.866 |
It is definitely a good improv. There a couple of notes that sound a bit wrong, but nearly all of it is great. Well done.
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Jan 24 2009, 06:32 PM
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Sounds good man.
You had some nice ideas that where developing. Your guitar tone fit the jam good also.Is this backing posted somewhere? I might like to take a crack at this. 
-------------------- "Think of a guitar solo as a paragraph. You need a clear beginning, a middle, and an end. Look at musical phrases like sentences, and make sure you break them up using punctuation—or space. You pause naturally when conversing, right? If you don't, you'll bore the listener. The same thing will happen with your audience if your solo is one dimensional. You'll wear them out and lose their attention." —Tom Principato
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Jan 24 2009, 07:02 PM
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QUOTE (Matt23 @ Jan 24 2009, 06:08 PM)  It is definitely a good improv. There a couple of notes that sound a bit wrong, but nearly all of it is great. Well done. Thx Matt23 for your comment I know there are a couple of notes that sound a bit wrong that is why i practice with recordings myself takes so i can learn form it I must learn some scales the ovoid these wrong notes Cheers QUOTE (UncleSkillet @ Jan 24 2009, 06:32 PM) Sounds good man. You had some nice ideas that where developing. Your guitar tone fit the jam good also.Is this backing posted somewhere? I might like to take a crack at this. Hi UncleSkillet Thx for your comment. I appreciate the meaning of fellow guitarist. Cheers -------------------- Gear: PaulReedSmith Santana 3
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Jan 24 2009, 11:59 PM
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I just listened to it, sounds great man. I love the tone, it reminds me of Santana a bit
As far as technique goes, I would advise better bending and vibrato control. Other than that it's pretty good, and there are some very interesting lines in there.
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Jan 25 2009, 12:14 PM
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QUOTE (Ivan Milenkovic @ Jan 24 2009, 11:59 PM) I just listened to it, sounds great man. I love the tone, it reminds me of Santana a bit As far as technique goes, I would advise better bending and vibrato control. Other than that it's pretty good, and there are some very interesting lines in there.Thx Ivan, The bending and vibrato is something i will work on. Maybe in a couple of weeks after i have worked on the lessons you and Pedja advised i will record it again to see if there is some progress made. I love Santana he is very good, so this i a great compliment, thx. The tone is (if someone is interested and has Line6 Gearbox or Podfarm: 1990 Brit J 800 with cab 4 x 121978 Brit Celest T75's FX: Anlog Delay & Medium hall Reverb & Gate -------------------- Gear: PaulReedSmith Santana 3
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Jan 25 2009, 02:24 PM
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Great mate, thanks for sharing! Will try the tone! Good luck with those lessons, and post something again soon!
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Jan 26 2009, 10:34 AM
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Sounds pretty good
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Jan 26 2009, 02:51 PM
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QUOTE (superize @ Jan 26 2009, 10:34 AM) Sounds pretty good Thx mate -------------------- Gear: PaulReedSmith Santana 3
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Jan 27 2009, 02:53 PM
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Sounds good mate, needs a little bit of practice in some areas like Ivan said, but besides that it's spot on
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Jan 27 2009, 08:36 PM
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QUOTE (Toni Suominen @ Jan 27 2009, 02:53 PM) Sounds good mate, needs a little bit of practice in some areas like Ivan said, but besides that it's spot on Hi Toni Thx for taking the time to listen and give positive feedback. I working hard on these parts. Cheerio -------------------- Gear: PaulReedSmith Santana 3
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Jan 27 2009, 11:07 PM
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QUOTE (playaxeman @ Jan 27 2009, 09:36 PM) Hi Toni Thx for taking the time to listen and give positive feedback. I working hard on these parts. Cheerio No problem mate, and upload something again soon!
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