 Mittwoch - Kristofer Dahl, Homage to all German GMC:ers! |
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 Jan 24 2009, 10:18 PM
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 GMC Founder & Rocker  Group: Root Admin Posts: 10.435 Joined: 15-August 05 From: Stockholm, Sweden Member No.: 2  |
Germany is the land of metal - with bands like Blind Guardian, Rammstein etc, there's no doubt about it!
Here is a somewhat feeble attempt of mine to write a song in German - I hope all German speaking gmc'ers will listen to this one with their sense of humour turned ON!  In gray you will find my wishful English translation   >>Mittwoch MP3Montag, bin Ich so müde (Monday, I am so tired) Montag, töte Ich ein Fliege (Monday, I killed a fly) Dienstag, habe Ich das Haus gereinigt (Tuesday, I cleaned the house) Dienstag...Ich gehe weiter (Tuesday...I move on) Donnerstag, hörst du nicht das Donner? (Thursday, can't you hear the thunder?) Donnerstag, Ich bin das Donner! (Thursday, I am the thunder!) Freitag, ist nur einem Tag...nur einem Tag bleiben...einem Tag... (Friday, is just a day...only one day left...one day) Mittwoch! Habe Ich vergesst (Wednesday! I forgot about it) Mittwoch! Mein Deutsch ist schlecht (Wednesday! My German is bad) Mittwoch! Ist nicht die beste (Wednesday! Is not the best) Sch****...habe Ich vergessen (S*** I forgot about it) Samstag, heute bin Ich nicht so müde (Saturday, today I am not so tired) Samstag, den ganzen Tag ist ein Fest! (Saturday, the whole day is a party!) Sonntag..jetzt weise Ich! (Sunday...now I know!) Ich habe eine Tag vergessen (I forgot about one day) Mittwoch! Habe Ich vergesst (Wednesday! I forgot about it) Mittwoch! Mein Deutsch ist schlecht (Wednesday! My German is bad) Mittwoch! Ist nicht die beste (Wednesday! Is not the best) Sch****...habe Ich vergessen (S*** I forgot about it) SOLO Montag, Dienstag, Donnerstag, Freitag, Samstag, Sonntag (Monday, Tuseday, Thursday, Friday, Saturday, Sunday) Aber es ist nicht korrekt! (But that is not correct!) Nein... Ich habe eine Tag vergessen...jaa (No...I forgot about one day...yeah) Du weist welche Tag (You know what day) Ich weise welche Tag ( I know what day) Ihr...jaa! (They...yeah!) Mittwoch! Habe Ich vergesst (Wednesday! I forgot about it) Mittwoch! Mein Deutsch ist schlecht (Wednesday! My German is bad) Mittwoch! Ist nicht die beste (Wednesday! Is not the best) Ja! Noch einmal! (Yeah! One more time!) PS I would be very grateful to get your improvement suggestions just like last time - as it helped me a lot! Also - if anybody wants to have a go at mastering this one, here is an unmastered version: Thanks a lot for listening! -------------------- I do not have any natural talent at all - you can beat me with hard work.
Check out my video lessons + Kris & Marcus collab KMC Metal. My latest songs: "Mittwoch" & "A Loner" |
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Jan 24 2009, 10:22 PM
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 Learning Rock Star  Group: GMC Wiki:er Posts: 3.277 Joined: 22-October 07 From: Molde, Norway Member No.: 3.108 |
Awesome, Kris!! This is badassery at it's finest
-------------------- GMC is not just a website... It's a lifestyle!
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Jan 24 2009, 10:23 PM
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GMC Founder & Rocker Group: Root Admin Posts: 10.435 Joined: 15-August 05 From: Stockholm, Sweden Member No.: 2 |
QUOTE (Canis @ Jan 25 2009, 12:22 AM)  Awesome, Kris!! This is badassery at it's finest hehe thanks Canis - you are always very supportive, means a lot!
-------------------- I do not have any natural talent at all - you can beat me with hard work.
Check out my video lessons + Kris & Marcus collab KMC Metal. My latest songs: "Mittwoch" & "A Loner" |
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Jan 24 2009, 10:23 PM
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 Learning Tone Seeker  Group: Members Posts: 908 Joined: 9-October 08 From: East Midlands U.K Member No.: 6.062 |
Nice growling harmonies
 and strong riffs.
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Jan 24 2009, 10:23 PM
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 Accomplished Tone Master Group: GMC Wiki:er Posts: 1.745 Joined: 17-January 08 From: Scotland Member No.: 3.866 |
Das song ist sehr gut, und Mittwoch ist eine schlect Tag.
Great song Kris, really cool. 
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Jan 24 2009, 10:25 PM
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 GMC:er Group: Members Posts: 553 Joined: 3-January 09 From: Szczecin, Poland Member No.: 6.530 |
Hm, I always thought it's Scandinavian countries, who drag all the metal world
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Jan 24 2009, 10:26 PM
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GMC Founder & Rocker Group: Root Admin Posts: 10.435 Joined: 15-August 05 From: Stockholm, Sweden Member No.: 2 |
QUOTE (Matt23 @ Jan 25 2009, 12:23 AM) Das song ist sehr gut, und Mittwoch ist eine schlect Tag. Great song Kris, really cool. Danke mein Freund!! 
-------------------- I do not have any natural talent at all - you can beat me with hard work.
Check out my video lessons + Kris & Marcus collab KMC Metal. My latest songs: "Mittwoch" & "A Loner" |
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Jan 24 2009, 10:27 PM
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Learning Rock Star Group: GMC Wiki:er Posts: 3.277 Joined: 22-October 07 From: Molde, Norway Member No.: 3.108 |
QUOTE (utak3r @ Jan 24 2009, 10:25 PM) Hm, I always thought it's Scandinavian countries, who drag all the metal world Germany is honorary-Scandinavians
-------------------- GMC is not just a website... It's a lifestyle!
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Jan 24 2009, 10:28 PM
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GMC:er Group: Members Posts: 553 Joined: 3-January 09 From: Szczecin, Poland Member No.: 6.530 |
QUOTE (Canis @ Jan 24 2009, 10:27 PM) Germany is honorary-Scandinavians ah, I see
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Jan 24 2009, 10:29 PM
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 GMC:er Group: Members Posts: 2.649 Joined: 2-June 07 From: Raleigh-Durham, NC Member No.: 1.984 |
I played this for my brother, he thought it was a new rammstein song
This post has been edited by JVM: Jan 24 2009, 10:29 PM --------------------  Gear: Fender American Deluxe Stratocaster; Mesa Boogie F-30 112 combo |
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Jan 24 2009, 10:33 PM
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GMC Founder & Rocker Group: Root Admin Posts: 10.435 Joined: 15-August 05 From: Stockholm, Sweden Member No.: 2 |
QUOTE (JVM @ Jan 25 2009, 12:29 AM) I played this for my brother, he thought it was a new rammstein song wow thanks!! I must say Rammstein have really been my metal heroes the last year. I guess I should look out so I don't get too much influenced by them! Who knows I might end up learning German grammar...! (even though it's going to take a while of course)
-------------------- I do not have any natural talent at all - you can beat me with hard work.
Check out my video lessons + Kris & Marcus collab KMC Metal. My latest songs: "Mittwoch" & "A Loner" |
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Jan 24 2009, 10:33 PM
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 Learning Roadie Group: Members Posts: 804 Joined: 20-July 07 From: Germany Member No.: 2.361 |
That's a lot of fun Kris
-------------------- "They play it extremely fast, it doesn't make any sense, but it's Slayer so it makes a lot of sense" :)
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Jan 24 2009, 10:35 PM
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GMC:er Group: Members Posts: 553 Joined: 3-January 09 From: Szczecin, Poland Member No.: 6.530 |
Yeah, it really has this "tanz metal" touch
My thought: While at PMed riffs it sounds really cool, those not muted riffs could have somewhat deeper sound, heavier, now it's... hm, can't find a proper english word.... too screamy? Other than that I like this one
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Jan 24 2009, 10:41 PM
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 Learning Roadie Group: Members Posts: 364 Joined: 13-February 07 From: Germany, BW Member No.: 1.193 |
Haha Kris ich kann gar nicht aufhören zu lachen
Was für ein geiler Song und dein Deutsch ist gar nicht so schlecht  English Version: Kris I can't stop laughing. What a great song and your german is not bad at all. You should form a German Metal Band. --------------------  My gear: Ibanez SA 220 Fm Line 6 Spider II Amp Line 6 POD X3 |
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Jan 24 2009, 10:41 PM
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GMC Founder & Rocker Group: Root Admin Posts: 10.435 Joined: 15-August 05 From: Stockholm, Sweden Member No.: 2 |
QUOTE (utak3r @ Jan 25 2009, 12:35 AM) Yeah, it really has this "tanz metal" touch My thought: While at PMed riffs it sounds really cool, those not muted riffs could have somewhat deeper sound, heavier, now it's... hm, can't find a proper english word.... too screamy? Other than that I like this one ah you mean the chorus riff? Yes you are right I could try adding some muting there for a more staccato feel. Maybe something to think about for the live version! Thanks for the comment!
-------------------- I do not have any natural talent at all - you can beat me with hard work.
Check out my video lessons + Kris & Marcus collab KMC Metal. My latest songs: "Mittwoch" & "A Loner" |
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Jan 24 2009, 10:42 PM
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 GMC:er Group: Members Posts: 1.765 Joined: 2-April 08 From: Budapest, Hungary Member No.: 4.782 |
Haha, great Kris I like your pronunciation! I love the heavy riffing (and the super-solo)
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Jan 24 2009, 10:43 PM
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GMC Founder & Rocker Group: Root Admin Posts: 10.435 Joined: 15-August 05 From: Stockholm, Sweden Member No.: 2 |
QUOTE (edguy @ Jan 25 2009, 12:41 AM) English Version: Kris I can't stop laughing. What a great song and your german is not bad at all. hehe thanks! I didn't verify this text with any German speaking person - so I am pretty sure it's full things German school teachers would hate, though!
-------------------- I do not have any natural talent at all - you can beat me with hard work.
Check out my video lessons + Kris & Marcus collab KMC Metal. My latest songs: "Mittwoch" & "A Loner" |
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Jan 24 2009, 10:52 PM
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Learning Roadie Group: Members Posts: 364 Joined: 13-February 07 From: Germany, BW Member No.: 1.193 |
Ok if you want to know it in detail I can show you the mistakes
But not because I want to critise you it's only for your learning process One mistake is here: Donnerstag, hörst du nicht das Donner? You must say: "den Donner" not "das Donner" Donnerstag, Ich bin das Donner! And here you have to say : "der Donner" I know it#s complicated. There are a few more mistakes but I really have to say that its very good for the beginning. Practice one more year and you become a famous German Metal guitarist who sing in german. -------------------- My gear: Ibanez SA 220 Fm Line 6 Spider II Amp Line 6 POD X3 |
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Jan 24 2009, 10:52 PM
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 Learning Rock Star  Group: Student Instructor Posts: 2.818 Joined: 23-March 07 From: Luxembourg Member No.: 1.402 |
Awesome song and idea!
There are a lot of grammar mistakes, but who cares? You´re not getting rated by your language knowledge but by your creativity. The last is extremely big. If you do a song in Japanese, I´m gonna eat a broom.
-------------------- My guitars: Ibanez JEM555WH, Antonio Sanchez MOD S-20, Santander (not in use because it´s an extremely bad guitar...)
My amp: Marshall MG50DFX and an unknown one My wishlist: Fender Stratocaster, Boss Pedals: Distortion DS-1 |
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Jan 24 2009, 10:53 PM
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GMC Founder & Rocker Group: Root Admin Posts: 10.435 Joined: 15-August 05 From: Stockholm, Sweden Member No.: 2 |
QUOTE (edguy @ Jan 25 2009, 12:52 AM) Donnerstag, hörst du nicht das Donner? You must say: "den Donner" not "das Donner" Donnerstag, Ich bin das Donner! And here you have to say : "der Donner" I know it#s complicated. Oh so "Donner" was a correct word at least - I am happy about that!!
-------------------- I do not have any natural talent at all - you can beat me with hard work.
Check out my video lessons + Kris & Marcus collab KMC Metal. My latest songs: "Mittwoch" & "A Loner" |
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