 My First Full Song!, This is a piece I wrote a couple months ago! |
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 Mar 11 2009, 10:45 PM
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Hi GMC!! Today i would like to share a piece i wrote.
 This is my first "successful" (i really like it) and whole song.  I was inspired by some of the facts that have happend in my life. I wanted to express those sadness, happyness feelings which i have felt this last 6 months. This is a little "less than 2 minutes piece"  . i hope that you like and enjoy it!I'll be looking forward for constructive feedback. P.D.: I ONLY FOCUS ON COMPOSITION. I really like music theory, but for this minisong, i decided to be kind of "free" and forget all the theory and only write what was on my mind according to what i felt. Because of that fact, it would be a honor if Theory-God Mr. Andrew Cockburn described it. 
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Mar 11 2009, 11:02 PM
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Pretty cool
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Mar 11 2009, 11:20 PM
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nice piece in this midi
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Mar 12 2009, 01:11 AM
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i liked it. it had a mellow, laid back, but storytelling type of vibe to it that i really enjoyed.
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Mar 12 2009, 01:45 AM
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QUOTE (19935027rafa @ Mar 11 2009, 05:45 PM)  Hi GMC!! Today i would like to share a piece i wrote. This is my first "successful" (i really like it) and whole song. I was inspired by some of the facts that have happend in my life. I wanted to express those sadness, happyness feelings which i have felt this last 6 months. This is a little "less than 2 minutes piece" . i hope that you like and enjoy it!I'll be looking forward for constructive feedback. P.D.: I really like music theory, but for this minisong, i decided to be kind of "free" and forget all the theory and only write what was on my mind according to what i felt. Because of that fact, it would be a honor if Theory-God Mr. Andrew Cockburn described it. Very nice piece man! I really like it a lot! DO you have an mp3 version with better midi sounds? I would love to hear that! -------------------- |
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Mar 12 2009, 03:26 PM
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Great arrangement!
However, I think that composition has no focus, I couldn't remember single melody, simply, listener can't feel where the melody is going. -------------------- |
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Mar 12 2009, 09:30 PM
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QUOTE (David Wallimann @ Mar 11 2009, 10:45 PM) Very nice piece man! I really like it a lot! DO you have an mp3 version with better midi sounds? I would love to hear that! Thanks David!! I'm glad you liked it. Unfortunately i have not been able to find a good MIDI-MP3 Converter. Do you know any good converter? QUOTE (Vasilije Vukmirovic @ Mar 12 2009, 12:26 PM) Great arrangement! However, I think that composition has no focus, I couldn't remember single melody, simply, listener can't feel where the melody is going. Thanks!, well, that is because i wanted to focus only on the composition  , structure and feeling of this piece, and i wanted it to be unpredictable 
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