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post Sep 5 2009, 02:45 PM
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Well... finally there's some sign of life from up here!! tongue.gif
And I'm building a song a the moment... I'm not stuck yet, but like to get some comment from you guys on this song so far!

The lyrics so far are:

Lifted by thoughts


(Spoken)
Sitting near this old dreaming man,
wondering what he's dreaming of.
suddenly he's taking my hand
In a squall, I'm looking through his eyes!


He is showing me the best he could give...
The love, the pain and sorrow he has missed
His youth had given him nothing then pain
But he has done his best to hold and maintain

Could this man take care of his son?
He's suffering, he has failed on this one...
He is showing me ... he like to give more
of his love, but he's old and won't hold it no more

This post has been edited by skipdaflip: Sep 8 2009, 09:56 PM
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post Sep 5 2009, 06:17 PM
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Great song so far mate smile.gif
You've come a long way! smile.gif
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post Sep 5 2009, 08:21 PM
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lyrics are awesome! smile.gif


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post Sep 5 2009, 08:31 PM
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This is great man, sounds really cool, and the lyrics are great as well! smile.gif


About the mixing:

- FX for vocals is a bit edgy
- Drums are barely audible in mix
- Cymbals are too strong


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post Sep 5 2009, 09:03 PM
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Thanks for all the replies!! I'll take your mixing advice and edit this while creating the rest of the song...
Mixing the song the right way stays hard!!

I've got an Idea about the rest of the lyric... but will post the rest later!


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Line6 X3 Live
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post Sep 6 2009, 07:35 PM
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Where he's thinking of should be What he's thinking of wink.gif

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