 My Take On Mojo Oro Pt. 1!, What do you think |
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 Sep 14 2009, 08:48 PM
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Okay, as I i mentioned somewhere before, I've been practicing this for a while, and today i found the time needed record it. It took about 60 takes, and this is the 57th of them. The reason it's uploaded in the forum and not youtube is because It's still a bit sloppy, and I'm going to record a better version. Maybe
 Anyways, Id like to hear comments about this, and, about my technicue generally, And how much do I have to improve to make it pass in the rec program. No need to tell me where i screwed up or how bad i did it, i know that very well  So here it is: 
MojoOroFinalBeta.wmv ( 3.8MB )
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Sep 14 2009, 08:51 PM
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It really sounds like the tempo is too fast for you man. Slow it down a bit and perfect it there first. Good effort though
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Sep 14 2009, 08:58 PM
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Great take, couple of notes weak here and there, but it seems you got it all done, just need time to settle a bit until it is perfect. Well done
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Sep 14 2009, 09:02 PM
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Good job, you´re definitely getting it. Just slow down a bit (120 bpm is enough, in my opinion) and clean up the dirty parts. Well done!
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Sep 14 2009, 09:06 PM
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GMC:er Group: Members Posts: 176 Joined: 7-November 08 From: Finland Member No.: 6.203 |
I think that most of the sloppiness if caused by the (now much smaller) recording fear of mine. Just more takes and it'll come
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Sep 14 2009, 09:10 PM
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QUOTE (Wabba @ Sep 14 2009, 09:06 PM)  I think that most of the sloppiness if caused by the (now much smaller) recording fear of mine. Just more takes and it'll come I still have that in large amounts! Give it a bit of time and you'll be able to do a great take. -------------------- *Ibanez 2550E Prestige
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Sep 14 2009, 09:51 PM
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Great take! I guess there are some work on it, it isn't quite accurate yet, but this is a nice job. Congrats!
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Sep 14 2009, 10:23 PM
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awesome job
and i know what you mean about recording fear.. i think i'm just getting over that
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Sep 14 2009, 10:24 PM
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Very good take! That fear of recording will wear of with constant recording
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Sep 14 2009, 11:48 PM
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Great start. Keep it up
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Sep 15 2009, 12:29 AM
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QUOTE (Emir Hot @ Sep 15 2009, 12:48 AM) Great start. Keep it up Agree, potential is there, bit more work and it shall be ok.
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Sep 15 2009, 05:30 AM
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Thanks guys, i really appreciate these kind comments
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Sep 27 2009, 02:45 PM
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Still missing an answer to that would this pass rec program... I don't want to post it into youtube unless i know that it's good
 . I have fixed my picking, i can now pick this fully from wrist, but if this take can pass the rec test, then i'd rather spend my time practicing something new (like phrygian soloing -advanced, It so hard with all those 5- and 6-notes per beat rhytm patterns and i just can't stop practicing it )So, Could it pass the rec...? EDIT: Btw, Are double posts allowed? This post has been edited by Wabba: Sep 27 2009, 02:46 PM |
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Sep 27 2009, 03:02 PM
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 Learning Tone Master  Group: GMC Wiki:er Posts: 774 Joined: 18-June 09 From: Genarp, Sweden Member No.: 7.291 |
Well done, you'll almost there. But I must say that i understand why You are shaking your hand at the end, if it was the 57'th take..... My hand would have shaken after the first 8 bars...
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Sep 27 2009, 03:08 PM
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QUOTE (Staffy @ Sep 27 2009, 03:02 PM) Well done, you'll almost there. But I must say that i understand why You are shaking your hand at the end, if it was the 57'th take..... My hand would have shaken after the first 8 bars... Oh yeah, indeed, but it looks still stupid...  
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Sep 27 2009, 03:28 PM
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QUOTE (Wabba @ Sep 27 2009, 04:08 PM) Oh yeah, indeed, but it looks still stupid... Nah, if that argentian guy shook his hand after playing "Flight of the bumble-bee" in 340 BPM (Guiness World Record), I think its allowed for You to shake Yours as well....,
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Sep 27 2009, 03:31 PM
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QUOTE (Staffy @ Sep 27 2009, 03:28 PM) Nah, if that argentian guy shook his hand after playing "Flight of the bumble-bee" in 340 BPM (Guiness World Record), I think its allowed for You to shake Yours as well...., Hmmm, yeah, i guess so  , But what do you think, could this pass the rec test? Or is there too many mistakes and bad stuff?
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Sep 27 2009, 03:39 PM
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QUOTE (Wabba @ Sep 27 2009, 04:31 PM) Hmmm, yeah, i guess so , But what do you think, could this pass the rec test? Or is there too many mistakes and bad stuff?Hmmm, that was a tough question. I really dont know. Since its such a hard piece Muris has to be a little kind... But personally, I had rehearsed for one more week or so. If You are not 100% satisfied yourself, You should'nt post it. //Staffay -------------------- "As soon as You learn your first three chords - get a good lawyer." -Ritchie Blackmore
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Sep 27 2009, 03:56 PM
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QUOTE (Staffy @ Sep 27 2009, 03:39 PM) Hmmm, that was a tough question. I really dont know. Since its such a hard piece Muris has to be a little kind... But personally, I had rehearsed for one more week or so. If You are not 100% satisfied yourself, You should'nt post it. //Staffay Well, i'm not 100% satisfied with it, because I make mistakes and play it from the elbow, BUT I also already started practicing a new lesson, which is taking all my time, so maybe I just can't participate yet..  |
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Sep 27 2009, 04:06 PM
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QUOTE (Wabba @ Sep 27 2009, 04:56 PM) Well, i'm not 100% satisfied with it, because I make mistakes and play it from the elbow, BUT I also already started practicing a new lesson, which is taking all my time, so maybe I just can't participate yet.. Don't worry about it. Take your time, and work on other lessons meanwhile, and you won't be bored with it. If you are not pleased about it, and know what you should do to improve, you don't need anyone to rate it, and tell you what you already know
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