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muntahunta
post Oct 6 2009, 01:11 AM
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QUOTE (audiopaal @ Oct 5 2009, 08:54 PM) *
Here's an "updated version" with a little lower volume before the chorus smile.gif
Oh, and the sound is better, as the last one was quite sharp!

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Iluha: I mixed the guitars a bit differently this time, and I believe they sound great. So hopefully you'll like them as well, and if not I hope you can tell me why and what I should do to make them better. It does matter, because I want this song to turn out great smile.gif Oh, and the bass is your part, so make it shine biggrin.gif

I'm also thinking about writing another riff to break up the song, to make it more interesting.
I'll let you know what I got after a few days, and in the meantime you and he others are free to help me out with ideas and suggestions for how it should sound smile.gif

Munta: The first riff is the Chorus (Played as an intro). The two next ones are either verse and bridge, or interlude and verse. I vote for verse and bridge, but I'll let you decide as you're the one writing lyrics smile.gif Then the Chorus comes again at the end. Sounds good?

Oh, and if anyone has some suggestions on how to make this even better, please share smile.gif


im loving the sound of this and the structure sounds great, I have 1 suggestion though. I think the part before the chorus should be halved in length, so rather than the 16 bars, make it 8 bars. I think I could add a more punchy path into the chorus with that being a little shorter


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post Oct 6 2009, 03:02 AM
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Well my biggest problem is the bass sound, I can't really hear what notes the bass is playing when the guitars and drums are also there, meaning I could only hear the bass part in the interlude, and rest of the time I can just hear bass frequencies.
I think it's just a matter of playing with the EQ of the tracks.

The guitar sound is a bit better but still sounds too trebly to my taste.. maybe cut a bit of the treble and add more mids?

So when do we start the recording project? I think we already got a good song idea and structure. tongue.gif



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post Oct 6 2009, 07:31 PM
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Sounds like we have the song structure almost figured out, I want like one more section for a bridge where the song reaches a climax

Any ideas


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post Oct 6 2009, 07:57 PM
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QUOTE (Jose Mena @ Oct 6 2009, 08:31 PM) *
Sounds like we have the song structure almost figured out, I want like one more section for a bridge where the song reaches a climax

Any ideas

That's what I'm working on smile.gif
But please, if anyone have any ideas on how it should be
(as my idea might not please everyone, who knows? smile.gif), spit it out biggrin.gif
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post Oct 6 2009, 10:04 PM
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QUOTE (audiopaal @ Oct 6 2009, 07:57 PM) *
That's what I'm working on smile.gif
But please, if anyone have any ideas on how it should be
(as my idea might not please everyone, who knows? smile.gif), spit it out biggrin.gif


maybe after a chorus it could quieten down into a short drum/bass part maybe with some small guitar parts with lots of effects (delay/chorus, maybe a phaser? lol) and then a short stop for a beat or two, then into a powerfull booming breakdown tongue.gif followed by a chorus?


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Fly From The Inside (Cover)
So Far Away
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Never Again (Cover)
Crash
Wake Me

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post Oct 13 2009, 02:52 PM
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Any updates guys?


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post Oct 13 2009, 10:50 PM
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QUOTE (Jose Mena @ Oct 13 2009, 03:52 PM) *
Any updates guys?


I've been working double shifts lately, but that's coming to an end in a few days smile.gif
So I'll have an update in a few days!

Anyone else recorded any ideas for the last part? smile.gif
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post Oct 18 2009, 03:57 PM
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Meh, I'm kinda stuck atm..
I'll work some more on it tonight though smile.gif

Any ideas from the rest of you guys?
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post Oct 18 2009, 06:19 PM
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unfortunatly not sad.gif my pod x3 just broke (well, the power cable) so ive gotta get a new one before i can record


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Guitars:
Epiphone Les Paul Standard w/ Dual EMG 81 Pickups. Size 11 Strings.
Ibanez GRG170DX w/ Scallopd frets 17-24 - w/ Dimebucker and APH-1.
Tanglewood TW28 STR DLX CE INDIANA Acoustic Guitar
NEW: Dean Deceiver w/ EMG 81/EMG 85 Pickups
Effects:
Pod XT Live AND Pod X3 Live
Recording:
Cubase SX3

My Bands Myspace
Act Of Silence

Songs:

Fly From The Inside (Cover)
So Far Away
Down
Break The Cycle
Never Again (Cover)
Crash
Wake Me

More Acoustic Songs:
Chris Kerswell Soundclick Page

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post Oct 18 2009, 06:40 PM
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Nothing here man sorry sad.gif
me and my family just moved to a new house, and me and my band finished recording our first album(got masterd today)
so Iv'e been preety busy lately..


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post Oct 20 2009, 02:53 AM
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No prob, I've been busy lately as well, this week I will try to put something together


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post Oct 20 2009, 08:26 AM
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QUOTE (Jose Mena @ Oct 20 2009, 03:53 AM) *
No prob, I've been busy lately as well, this week I will try to put something together

Nice! smile.gif
I'll try as well, and we can choose the part we like best!
Looking forward to your ideas though smile.gif
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post Nov 3 2009, 09:44 PM
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okay, sorry for the delay guy's my pod now has a new powerpack and i shall be recording some stuff soon smile.gif


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Guitars:
Epiphone Les Paul Standard w/ Dual EMG 81 Pickups. Size 11 Strings.
Ibanez GRG170DX w/ Scallopd frets 17-24 - w/ Dimebucker and APH-1.
Tanglewood TW28 STR DLX CE INDIANA Acoustic Guitar
NEW: Dean Deceiver w/ EMG 81/EMG 85 Pickups
Effects:
Pod XT Live AND Pod X3 Live
Recording:
Cubase SX3

My Bands Myspace
Act Of Silence

Songs:

Fly From The Inside (Cover)
So Far Away
Down
Break The Cycle
Never Again (Cover)
Crash
Wake Me

More Acoustic Songs:
Chris Kerswell Soundclick Page

Check out Munta's Step By Step Songwriting Lesson
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