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Jan 7 2011, 03:25 AM
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![]() Fire Up The Blades, Moderator ![]() Group: GMC Senior Posts: 8.932 Joined: 6-March 07 From: St. Petersburg, Florida Member No.: 1.304 |
Found the bare mp3 file on my computer and almost cried, thought I had originally lost this one when my computer crashed. "Mastered" it a tad bit to better the mix, and it still sounds pretty cool I think. This isn't a typical song for me, and I'm quite proud of it. Lyrics: _________________________ I cannot believe in who I am I cannot believe in anything A thickening darkness is all I know Unbearable sadness is all I know Lost to the waters of guilt I suffer alone in my solitary shell A worthless soul not worth saving Pathetic excuse for life I cannot stand this heavy rain I cannot take this pain I could not save my own kin I cannot save anyone My mind is falling apart beneath the weight of this heavy rain I cannot bear my own sins I am simply better off dead The sound rain permeates the air in the city Lying still against the ground Lies the body of a man who lost everything |
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Jan 7 2011, 10:10 AM
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![]() GMC:er ![]() Group: Members Posts: 42 Joined: 11-December 10 From: Stockholm Member No.: 11.788 |
Hey! its nice but the vocals are kinda unclear but the guitars sound great!
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Jan 8 2011, 02:06 AM
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![]() Fire Up The Blades, Moderator ![]() Group: GMC Senior Posts: 8.932 Joined: 6-March 07 From: St. Petersburg, Florida Member No.: 1.304 |
Yeah the vocals are a synthesizer, at the time I wasn't totally experienced with it. Maybe I'll redo them in time.
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Jan 8 2011, 04:31 AM
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![]() GMC:er ![]() Group: GMC Instructor Posts: 6.286 Joined: 23-December 09 From: Atlanta, Georgia, USA Member No.: 8.794 |
Very interesting stuff. The music sounds like maybe 90s indie rock then the vocal busts in to a sort of thrash growl, it's a really creative combo. Well done!
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Jan 8 2011, 04:42 AM
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![]() GMC:er ![]() Group: Members Posts: 468 Joined: 26-September 08 From: QLD, Australia Member No.: 5.967 |
Really nicely done. Love it when the guitars finally come in heavier. Lol, here's some irony - though I'm not into the growling style, when the low voice first started, I really wanted the guitars to chug and thrash rather than the clean playing. But nicely brought together.
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Jan 8 2011, 07:53 PM
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![]() Fire Up The Blades, Moderator ![]() Group: GMC Senior Posts: 8.932 Joined: 6-March 07 From: St. Petersburg, Florida Member No.: 1.304 |
If I could I would. All I have of this song is the mp3 file, so if I want to change anything, I unfortunately have to redo it all.
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Jan 8 2011, 09:35 PM
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![]() GMC Admin & Bass Instructor ![]() Group: GMC Instructor Posts: 14.042 Joined: 30-November 07 From: Belgrade, Serbia Member No.: 3.410 |
I know the feeling. I lost some of my early work and I regret it
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