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 Apr 24 2011, 02:01 PM
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 GMC:er  Group: Members Posts: 2.348 Joined: 5-July 08 From: Enschede/overijssel/Nederland Member No.: 5.426  |
Hey guys,
I've written some lyrics, just parts, when I get inspired, and this is just more of e poem, on which I would love some feedback. ------------------ A bright darkness and a dim light, realisation sets all unimportant things aside. My heart bearing the weight of the night, a fading light, almost out of sight. Finding the remnants of your power and might, the soul preparing for the final fight. ---------------------------------- Remember, I don't really think these things trough, or really think about how it should go, often, a line or 2 just pops into my head. This post has been edited by Jesse: Apr 24 2011, 02:02 PM -------------------- Don't just play it. Feel it!
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Apr 24 2011, 02:16 PM
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 Learning Rock Star  Group: MVC Posts: 1.068 Joined: 16-October 10 From: Istanbul,Turkey Member No.: 11.399 |
I like it. Your ryhming is very strong. When i try to write lyrics i do same as you. A line pops into my head then i write the rest of it according to that
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Apr 24 2011, 02:19 PM
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GMC:er Group: Members Posts: 2.348 Joined: 5-July 08 From: Enschede/overijssel/Nederland Member No.: 5.426 |
Thank's:) Maybe we can share some lyrics some time (msn or something;P) I see your an ac/dc fan too? I saw em in Ahoy last year!:D Best time of my life! (probably)
-------------------- Don't just play it. Feel it!
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Apr 24 2011, 02:27 PM
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Learning Rock Star Group: MVC Posts: 1.068 Joined: 16-October 10 From: Istanbul,Turkey Member No.: 11.399 |
QUOTE (Jesse @ Apr 24 2011, 01:19 PM)  Thank's:) Maybe we can share some lyrics some time (msn or something;P) I see your an ac/dc fan too? I saw em in Ahoy last year!:D Best time of my life! (probably) I'd like that And yeah i am hardcore AC/DC fan  Unfortunately i've never got a chance to see them live 
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