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  Jul 31 2011, 02:21 PM
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Neoclassical Three-Level-Solo, Beginner
Link to original lesson HERE Guitar: Schecter Omen 6 extreme Amp: Kustom Arrow 16R throught Digitech RP155 This post has been edited by skennington: Aug 5 2011, 05:11 PM --------------------  |
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Jul 31 2011, 09:48 PM
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Hey there
 good take! A little bit uncertain at some points, but with more practice you'll get there! I can only feel that your hands are not very sure on what they are playing so this probably sends the sentiment of uncertainty. Put a little attitude in it and it'll sound 10 times as good 
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Aug 1 2011, 02:34 AM
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agree with cosmin here, i like the tone, i your picking, you just need to learn a bit more the song and practice it a bit more!
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Aug 1 2011, 01:02 PM
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A couple of things you could do to improve your performance. Do a wider vibrato, using your wrist more rather than fingers. And don't leave gaps between notes.
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Aug 1 2011, 04:00 PM
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Good attempt but I agree with the others that some more practice with this piece would improve your take. You're not far away but some more work on bending and vibrato will go a long way.
The arpeggio was also difficult for you so perhaps spend some time with some basic sweep picking lessons just to give you a boost in this area. If you isolate these areas of practice and find lessons or exercises that focus on improving those points, when you come to put it all together in this piece you will notice the improvement ! 
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Aug 1 2011, 07:56 PM
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Good job man, there are some things to improve but you are on the right track. You just need some more time of practice concentrating on your right hand picking, vibrato and bends. Keep on working hard!
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Aug 3 2011, 10:50 AM
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Nicely played, and as guys said - a bit uncertain. Picking and tone are good, but you need to spend a bit more time on slower tempos on this one, to polish up everything nicely. You seem to fret the notes, but not sure what scale you are using, try working on that. That first big bend was a bit weak as well, try to make it stronger and go directly to pitch.
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Aug 5 2011, 05:11 PM
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Keep at it man, your real close. 7.2 on this one..
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