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pikman
post Jan 20 2012, 02:50 PM
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this one i hope is a little better than my other one,i appreciated all the feedback and can learn a lot from all of you so thank you.....shred on.........Attached File  last_breath.mp3 ( 3.57MB ) Number of downloads: 126


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MonkeyDAthos
post Jan 20 2012, 04:41 PM
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Kick ass track man, the guitars lines are amazingly good IMO and got to love the intro tongue.gif, congrazt, ! ohmy.gif, i am not an expert on this, pretty sure other people will give you a lot of useful insides!.
but, well, the thing i didn't enjoy in the track was the drums, i don't know they sound a bit plastic and weak.

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Alex Feather
post Jan 20 2012, 05:21 PM
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I like it a lot! Good job! Maybe try to build up solo and make it a little bit less busy in the beginning other than that sounds great!


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post Jan 27 2012, 09:20 PM
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Shred on and thank you!
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Sinisa Cekic
post Jan 28 2012, 12:50 AM
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Superb shot. Which program you used? The guitar sounds extra !!


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post Jan 28 2012, 01:25 AM
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That was great! You are very creative in your composition - kept my attention all the way through! Good guitar-manship as well! Big thumbs up!



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