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 Jan 20 2012, 02:50 PM
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this one i hope is a little better than my other one,i appreciated all the feedback and can learn a lot from all of you so thank you.....shred on.........
last_breath.mp3 ( 3.57MB )
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Jan 20 2012, 04:41 PM
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Kick ass track man, the guitars lines are amazingly good IMO and got to love the intro
 , congrazt, !  , i am not an expert on this, pretty sure other people will give you a lot of useful insides!.but, well, the thing i didn't enjoy in the track was the drums, i don't know they sound a bit plastic and weak. This post has been edited by MonkeyDAthos: Jan 20 2012, 04:44 PM -------------------- "Doing a bend without makin' a face..? is like eatin' food without tastin' it" - Paul Gilbert
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Jan 20 2012, 05:21 PM
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 Instructor  Group: GMC Instructor Posts: 4.332 Joined: 21-November 11 From: Los Angeles Member No.: 14.398 |
I like it a lot! Good job! Maybe try to build up solo and make it a little bit less busy in the beginning other than that sounds great!
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Jan 27 2012, 09:20 PM
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GMC:er Group: Members Posts: 16 Joined: 29-November 11 From: New York Member No.: 14.472 |
Shred on and thank you!
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Jan 28 2012, 12:50 AM
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Instructor Group: GMC Instructor Posts: 4.545 Joined: 15-October 08 From: Belgrade,Serbia Member No.: 6.085 |
Superb shot. Which program you used? The guitar sounds extra !!
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Jan 28 2012, 01:25 AM
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 Learning Rock Star Group: Members Posts: 975 Joined: 4-May 10 From: Bay Area, California Member No.: 10.312 |
That was great! You are very creative in your composition - kept my attention all the way through! Good guitar-manship as well! Big thumbs up!
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