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Feb 13 2012, 10:41 PM
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![]() Learning Tone Seeker ![]() Group: Members Posts: 627 Joined: 7-August 11 From: Sarajevo, Bosnia and Herzegovina Member No.: 13.558 |
Hey guys, just wanted to share the very first songs I ever composed and recorded - with my first band Distant Light.
I wrote these songs back in high school and I think these records are about 5 years old. It sucks. I know. So please do have fun listening to our awful playing and production http://soundcloud.com/dino-trnka/free-bird http://soundcloud.com/dino-trnka/distant-light-distant-light The fun part is that I'm going to remake the song "Free bird" with my new symphonic metal band Dolia, so I'll post it here when we're finished. This one will have female vocals and keyboards - yaaay! I'm really looking forward to this because the song "Free Bird" is the first song I ever wrote. It took me many months to compose it back then and today I have a special kind of love for it. I never really did it justice! So now is the chance. Stay tuned This post has been edited by Dinaga: Feb 13 2012, 11:38 PM -------------------- |
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Feb 14 2012, 01:56 AM
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![]() Apprentice Roadie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 488 Joined: 5-December 11 From: Florida, USA Member No.: 14.530 |
Okay bro, what sucks about it? You'll definitely have to put the remake on here also!
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Feb 14 2012, 10:05 AM
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![]() Instructor ![]() Group: GMC Instructor Posts: 14.131 Joined: 14-June 10 From: Bucharest Member No.: 10.636 |
Dinaga my friend, you are way to modest
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Feb 14 2012, 03:37 PM
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![]() Instructor ![]() Group: GMC Instructor Posts: 15.295 Joined: 3-March 07 From: Argentina Member No.: 1.289 |
Hey! This doesn't sound that bad!! Those are good demos that with some work can become good songs. I should check my old cassettes where I have my first songs. Be sure that they sound much worse than yours!
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Feb 14 2012, 04:54 PM
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![]() Instructor ![]() Group: GMC Instructor Posts: 4.332 Joined: 21-November 11 From: Los Angeles Member No.: 14.398 |
It doesn't suck at all! You should absolutely remake this song! And put on iTunes you can make some profit out of it!!!
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Feb 15 2012, 02:09 AM
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![]() GMC:er ![]() Group: Members Posts: 174 Joined: 3-July 10 From: Manchester Member No.: 10.762 |
a lot better than my first ever recording.
'Free Bird' isnt even that bad, its just the bass drum that lets it down the most. -------------------- |
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Feb 15 2012, 01:11 PM
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![]() Learning Tone Seeker ![]() Group: Members Posts: 627 Joined: 7-August 11 From: Sarajevo, Bosnia and Herzegovina Member No.: 13.558 |
Thanks a lot for listening and for all your feedback, mates.
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Mar 12 2012, 01:19 PM
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![]() Competitions Coordinator - Up the Irons ![]() Group: GMC Senior Posts: 5.289 Joined: 17-February 08 From: Stavanger, Norway Member No.: 4.276 |
That wasn't bad at all
Good songs too, thanks for sharing |
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Apr 19 2012, 06:25 PM
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![]() Learning Tone Seeker ![]() Group: Members Posts: 627 Joined: 7-August 11 From: Sarajevo, Bosnia and Herzegovina Member No.: 13.558 |
Hey mates, remember I was saying we're doing a remake of my first song?
Well here it is, with keyboards, female vocals, new guitar solo and a violin solo. Hope you like this ballad. Hope you like it. This post has been edited by Dinaga: Apr 19 2012, 06:31 PM -------------------- |
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Apr 20 2012, 01:01 AM
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GMC:er ![]() Group: Members Posts: 441 Joined: 20-January 10 From: The Appalachian Mountains Member No.: 9.238 |
Dinaga, that was awesome! I thought the mix was very well done, and I really liked your guitar solo, great tone!
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Apr 20 2012, 02:58 AM
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Learning Roadie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 75 Joined: 13-September 11 From: Florida Member No.: 13.866 |
Very cool man!
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Apr 20 2012, 04:58 PM
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![]() Learning Tone Seeker ![]() Group: Members Posts: 627 Joined: 7-August 11 From: Sarajevo, Bosnia and Herzegovina Member No.: 13.558 |
Thanks a lot guys, I'm very very happy you like it!
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Apr 21 2012, 02:36 AM
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![]() Apprentice Roadie ![]() Group: Members Posts: 488 Joined: 5-December 11 From: Florida, USA Member No.: 14.530 |
Great job! (Christy likes it too)!
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Apr 21 2012, 05:53 AM
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![]() GMC:er ![]() Group: Members Posts: 204 Joined: 7-February 09 From: Pewaukee Member No.: 6.750 |
Great expression!
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Apr 21 2012, 08:27 AM
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![]() Instructor ![]() Group: GMC Instructor Posts: 14.131 Joined: 14-June 10 From: Bucharest Member No.: 10.636 |
Hey D-man! Nice composition, nice sound and my friend, you have a great melodic sense
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Apr 21 2012, 10:08 AM
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![]() Learning Tone Seeker ![]() Group: Members Posts: 627 Joined: 7-August 11 From: Sarajevo, Bosnia and Herzegovina Member No.: 13.558 |
Thanks my friends!!
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