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TylerT
post Mar 7 2012, 08:53 AM
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Hey guys! Based on all the help I got while posting my last song in regards to song structure, I thought I'd do it again for this new tune im working on!

This one is a little heavier, and I'm also having some trouble finding a good way to end it off

Here's is the link!

http://soundcloud.com/tylerteeple/ggt-3

Thanks !


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post Mar 7 2012, 12:44 PM
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QUOTE (TylerT @ Mar 7 2012, 07:53 AM) *
Hey guys! Based on all the help I got while posting my last song in regards to song structure, I thought I'd do it again for this new tune im working on!

This one is a little heavier, and I'm also having some trouble finding a good way to end it off

Here's is the link!

http://soundcloud.com/tylerteeple/ggt-3

Thanks !


Hey Tyler, great as always man! I would let it breathe though as in my opinion it is a bit too crowded overall, so maybe a halftime heavy groove would end it nicely - I would also suggest to implement a less developed version of this possible ending groove somewhere in the middle, so that it won't just appear out of nowhere at the end biggrin.gif

cheers mate

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post Mar 8 2012, 12:01 AM
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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Mar 7 2012, 06:44 AM) *
Hey Tyler, great as always man! I would let it breathe though as in my opinion it is a bit too crowded overall, so maybe a halftime heavy groove would end it nicely - I would also suggest to implement a less developed version of this possible ending groove somewhere in the middle, so that it won't just appear out of nowhere at the end biggrin.gif

cheers mate

Cosmin


Awesome dude!!! Thanks so much Cosmin (fellow metal head \m/), I have an old lick I made that might just fit perfectly in this sense!

Ill post a new version when its ready!


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I shall be looking forward to that, my many stringed friend biggrin.gif


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