Hey,that was a fine take,thanks!

I can see you have some issues to hold on the grip,
few notes are missing(dumpened) and specially middle part with harmonics.
Try not to mute strings with index finger while playing that part,
on Em it's not the problem but be careful on G chord.
Needs bit more practicing but overally you're doing great,thumbs up!!

Will do more of these lessons btw.