QUOTE (kaznie_NL @ Feb 7 2009, 05:02 PM)

Can you give this a look Nemanja! I'm not sure about it... it has some major flaws, but I think some parts are quite nice

My voice isn't very steady yet, so that's why sometimes I really loose it

I wondered...would this be to bad to put on YouTube? I'm probably not going to, it's just for comparison. BTW, it's She Will be Loved by Maroon 5, and it's directly after a hockey match, that's why my hairs so flat

Thanks for uploading Kaz.This was such an enjoyment to watch.You should upload on youtube for sure.And you should defenetly work on you voice in the future.You have good high vocal,and good ear.You chould use that talent and work on it.
And start wrighting your own song at once.

The more you wright,they will be beter in time.And this music style sounds good on you.
Now,little a bout what you need to fix.First I know the song well so I undrestud every thing,but,second verse is not so understandeble.Be sure to pronounce the words better.About falsseto,it is good,but you need a bit omre power and control.
My advice is,take just one interval on the words "SHE---------WILL".Practice just that part,it would be better for this song and for your falsseto transmission in the future.
QUOTE (coloneldrew @ Feb 8 2009, 10:54 AM)

I have one too, its a little long. Dedicated to the worlds troops.
First of all tihs is a finished song,and it sounds AMAZING!!!!Every thing is good,arrangemet is a killer one.Singing is very good,and the moust important thing lyrics are amazing.Nothing to add,keep on making this kind of great songs.