That was pretty nice take!

I see that it's fully improvised which I liked a lot,
some very tasty licks inside.

Now,chord progression is what you should think about more.
You've been playing A Dorian most of the time which fits nice
EXCEPT over F7 chord,you play notes F# and E while F chord has notes F and Eb.
What I'm saying is,try to play arpeggios here and there,
play over chords notes.
Scale wise,it'd be some sort of A Aeolian flat 5(A,B,C,D,Eb,F,and G) over F7 chord.
Also there's E7 or E7/+9 chord,not sure atm.
Lay down on chord notes,add more out of scale notes
and resolve them to nearby scale note.
And try to sing along as you play.
sing something in advance and then try to repeat that with guitar,
you'll come up with some nice melodies and rhythmic patterns.

Thanks, great advice, Muris! Will try and do some new takes at another time. Not feeling too well right now (figured out it was food poisoning)

Ahh,sorry to hear!

Wish you fast and safe recovery tho,
I hope it's nothing serious.