Hy Muris

Well i practiced your lesson a little longer and i think i'v gotten it down pretty good now. I paid good attention to the bends so i hope there oke now. I tweaked the sound a bit so it should sound better now

And i also hope the triplet run is in timing right now


please let me know if there's still some thing that i haven't nailed


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cheers

Ahh, it does sound much better now,bravo!!

There was tiny "out" in the last lick
which is string skipping,you were kind a late to
lay the last note with the kick drum.
So you could try only that lick a for few times,
those are triplets just like in previous triplets runs,
everything else seems pretty fine,good job!

thank you for taking the time to reply


rock on!!

Anytime,keep rocking as well,you're doing great so far.