That is fine take really,timing is 100% correct
which is very important here!
You also nailed staccato part damn nice.

I almost typed to work on your vibrato more
but then I heard last longer note at 00:24
and vibrato there was really great!
Not too much to suggest you atm,
looking forward to the last section of this lesson
AND for some other lessons as well,keep working,good job.