Got a new song in progress and thought i would put it up in case anyone was interested
I uploaded a 1 minute version of it in the uploads section yesterday, but it's now up to 4 minutes.

I'm pleased with most of the sections so far, but i'm not sure about the chorus though, it's way too cheesy
Ideas, comments and criticism are more than welcome

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Nice song, and i like the cheese in the chorus.

That cheesy chorus is one of your better ones

Thanks



Cool Then i'm booking you for some just as cheesy vocals to fit ontop

Sounds cool Trond, you should get a band and kick up a tour, i would buy tickets

I think first riff will works to much better if you pick each note to times instead just one...
Second riff is awesome
Ah, mate, I need to record more songs, it's a great experience and I feel really good when I write a good riff !!!!

Love the last 3/4 + 7/8 + 3/4 + 4/4 (x2) ; 3/4 + 9/8 + 3/4 + 15/8 ; 5/8 + 3/4 + 5/8 + 3/4 + 2/4

(I hope it's correct )

I'll cheese my heart out, just for you babe

Man this song is great. I would like to hear with vocals.

Nice one trond. Theres alot of cool melodies in there, did good choices on the chords =)

Thanks for the good comments

Juan: That should be correct I've split it up with some other values though

Awesome song Trond, always enjoy your stuff

Thanks kyldeee

Like the song:) but the vocals are missing so goddamn much:( where do u live that noone wants to sing for you every day and night?

Edit: Or do they want, but you don´t want?