here is my take on that lesson, ive only been working on it two days so its kind of rough, see if you can spot the bum chord towards the end

Great playing man!

My only advice: I'm not sure if it's only the camera mic, but the palm muting chugga-chugga effect wasn't that tight at the beginning. Then, towards the 4th rhythmic theme, it became more clean again so maybe it just took you a little time to get it comfortable!

There were really good rhythmic stuff there so great work I'm sure you benefited a lot from this!

Yeah thats not the camera mic that was me I can play it with proper muting dont know why I didnt haha

Like ive said before I get mega nervous recording so that might have something to do with it? Thanks a lot for the feedback!

Nice take mate!

It's pretty neat, the only thing is what Berko said, sometimes the muting is not properly but is a minor thing.

Keep the good work!

Well played!

Some small mistakes, but for two days it is great. And You have such a nice tone in these recordings!

Thanks I will probably replace that vid today with a better recording, your comments on the tone mean a lot as I am very picking when setting one up for each piece. thank you