Hi muris

This is my second shot at your lesson. I have worked on my vibrato in I feel like I have a lot more control over it. Also, I added some reverb to my tone. Tell me what you think


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cheers!

I´m thinking...WOW!!!!
Wish I was half as good - GREAT take!!

A few timing issues and also 1 or 2 dough notes but nothing serious. I think at times you muted too earlier or you cut a note too short. Other than this though a good effort

Much better this time!!

Just be careful when you play harmonic on G string 5th fret with whammy bar in intro riff,
there's a D chord right after and you have to play it on time with kick drum, don't be late!
Now, beginning of tapped harmonics part wasn't that correct timing wise, what happened?
And you also changed couple of notes in tapping section but nothing radical, it can pass.
But one thing really caught my ear, you made pretty big gap after legato part
and before tremolo picking, you do need to jump to other position on the neck
but it should be done more smoother and not with break that obvious,
work more on these things I mentioned and it'll even better, good work!

Thank you muris and everyone for your kind response

I will work on those small errors. Thanks guys!

Np!

Hi browq,
I'm working on this one too, wow...your rendering sounded brilliant. What gear do you have and how did you record it?
Cheers Tony