Original lesson by David Walliman; http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/solo-guit...r-style-lesson/

Guitar: Tokai LR2

Recording: Digitech rp250, reaper

Rhythm placement - 4.5
Cleanness - 4
Feel - 4
Posture - 3.5
Sound - 4.5

Very nice take man I think you can improve your posture keeping all the fingers near the fingerboard, also when you're playing with two first fingers only.
Also, some bends are slightly out of tune. You can improve also your vibrato technique with some practice.
Awesome video quality, by the way!


/edit typo

Rhythm placement - 4.3
Cleanness - 4
Feel - 4
Posture - 3.7
Sound - 4.3

I agree with Jerry's comment. I would just add that everything needs much tighter connection between notes. You sound like you're breaking them constantly. There should be a nice and relaxed melody flow. Some notes went almost out of tune so be more careful there. Otherwise I really like it

Rhythm placement - 4.2
Cleanness - 4
Feel - 4
Posture - 3.8
Sound - 4.2

And also you might wanna try with overdrive next time,
to get more sustain and better control over your instrument.
Clean sound is tricky to control if you're not using real amp.

84% on this one man, (pass)