here is the original lesson-http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/solo-guitar/pentatonic-solo/ equipment used: guitar-yamaha pacifica amp-laney distortion-gx1
You should try to record your guitar in a recording software and mix the sound with the video. I could hardly hear the backing here. This take vas pretty ok, most of the time solid. I noticed that your guitar was not in tune. Be careful about these things because we're marking you down for something that didn't really need to happen.