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any thing im doing wrong. and im making sure i keep my thumb in the middle of the neck

Just try to clean it up a little, especially at the end. Make it flow smoother, and be surre to mute the strings. But otherwise, good job

Strength in the fingers will come with time. Legato is not that easy but you are doing good job there. You're not doing anything wrong - at least from what i can hear, so it's a matter of time and practice when your legato becomes loud.

k thats what im trying to get