Hey man, I started practicing it this week, here's my progress so far, I'm having quite a bit of trouble with muting, sometimes muting ahead of time, and I still need to work more on the sweeps.

Give me some pointers man!

Why didnt you use distortion (it sorta covers up your mistakes)?

And how did you record? (plz dont tell me you used a POD)

Shouldn't this be in PAVEL's section?

I don't want to cover mistakes, I want to overcome them.

I recorded using a BOSS Micro Digital Recorder, I Still havn't temperd around with it's settings so I just used an effect I thought sounded good and basicly the device's default recording settings.

this is a lesson by David, why should it be in Pavel's section?

Very cool man!
You got all the lick down pretty well.
I would just spend time working on articulation now.
All those little things that make a melody breathe such as left hand vibrato, slides, and stuff like that.
But you're on a good start!
Thanks for posting this! This is the first time I hear someone covering my music, thanks!
:-)

Ok thanks man, next week I think I'll have a better version